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Wabi-Sabi


Cars are the wind on the streets
semi-truck wheels shriek thunder,
rain shatters against stone and brick walls
on dusty roads, oak trees fence with twigs—
wushu wooden clatters.

Dreadful arrays of dryads
azure and amethyst gossamer haze,
sleek, silken strikes gist an opera of wisteria,
as they sway to silver breeze's sibilant rustles.
They chant lullabies in lyrical lilts of hued iridescence,
of hearth and opals back to my scarlet nest.

Angelus silver trills, the sylphic sways of pure rays,
Coral rosary—incense strands of aurulent rimes
hum, endless hymns echo as choral evensong
alleluias softly peal out—doves with wet eyes
that drift upward on whispery—ethereal wings.

Ocean's plea emerges from apothic abyss,
a voice conveys the core of faxed shores and stars,
with earth and wind in a solemn tone.

A cosmic biography—in loud squeals and sighs
sea vernacular hinges on nature's lasting awe.
Breath goes to fog—snow melts into puddles—rain returns,
a china-white grave—encases the deceased deer,
before thawing in the morning—icy skin lies frozen.
An eerie distance holds my hand in a purifying blizzard.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 29, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on being on the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup. A wonderful write. "Love It" Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
Toney Avatar
December 11, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Exceptional poetry, Lasaad. A belated congratulations on Poem of the Day!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 11:02 PM
Congratulations on your potd.
Nicole Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 6:13 PM
"alleluias softly drift upward on whispery—ethereal wings." Such a beautiful image to behold. However, "an eerie distance holds my hand in a purifying blizzard," creates a very dismal mood. So many emotions tangle within. Congratulations Lasaad, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:18 PM
Much appreciate your kind words and congratulations, dear Brandy
Elliott Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 5:36 PM
Wondrous and stellar penned POTD full of artistry, Sotto Poet. A big Congratulations on POTD. All the best. ~
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:18 PM
Much appreciate your kind words and congratulations, Regina
Lane Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 3:59 PM
Lasaad, a cosmic biography. A tour de force. A potd. Great writing. Congratulations on your potd.
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:17 PM
Thank you so much, dear Lin. Appreciate your congratulations and kind words my friend.
Culverhouse Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 1:43 PM
Excellent poetic expression, great write, well done getting POTD
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:17 PM
Thank you for your congratulations, Clive. The recognition both honors and humbles me.
Kaufman Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 11:57 AM
Dear Sotto poet, Congratulations on this POTD, so well crafted and rich in imagery. I am so pleased you are being recognized as of late for your gift. Enjoy th honor..
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Thank you for your congratulations, Nancy. The recognition both honors and humbles me.
Anaya Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 10:46 AM
Many congratulations on your POTD SP! The imagery reminds me of a Gothic chapel's interior- stark gritty, fecund beauty. You have inspired my last poem! Blessings to you ~Anaya
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 12:04 PM
Anaya, I want to express my sincere gratitude for your kind words. Your encouragement means a lot to me. Thank you.
Sharma  Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Back with heartiest congratulations on this beautiful honour of POTD, so well deserved!! :)
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 12:05 PM
Thank you so much, Hiya. Appreciate your congratulations and kind words my friend.
Baker Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations on this Exquisite poem receiving the POTD honor, my dear friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition! I was surprised to see I hadn't commented and FAVed this one, I'd read it and was interrupted and failed to comment and FAV it. Oops! Glad to see it receive it's just do. Have a great day! Bill
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 12:02 PM
Dear Bill, I wanted to express my gratitude for your kind words and congratulations. They mean a lot to me. Thank you!"
Kitchin Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 8:42 AM
Lasaad, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD!
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 12:03 PM
Much appreciate your kind words and congratulations, Tania
M  Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations Lasaad on POTD with this amazing poem full of wonderful imagery in true “Sotto Style” hehe!! So happy to see you here today…you truly deserve it Lasaad….Debx
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 12:01 PM
Thank you so much, Deb. Appreciate your congratulations and kind words my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Wabi-Sabi" is a wonderful write. "Love It" Have a great day with your wonderful win....................
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 12:00 PM
Thank you for your congratulations, Paula. The recognition both honors and humbles me.
Pandit Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 6:14 AM
Back with BIG congrats on a well deserved POTD, my friend. Enjoy your special day today.
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Thank you for your congratulations, Vijay. The recognition both honors and humbles me.
Fowler Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Terrific imagery Las. So well put together. Congratulations on POTD! :)
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Linda. Much appreciated
May Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 5:52 AM
A stellar write Sotto, Congrats on POTD
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Thank you so much, Joseph. Appreciate your congratulations and kind words my friend.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 2:48 AM
Dear Sotto. Many Congratulations on the POTD. Such a wonderful imagery. Well done. I'm glad you had this award. You really deserve it. Have a great day!
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Much appreciate your kind words and congratulations, Maria
Messina Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 2:07 AM
Such a creative write, Lasaad. I'm in awe of the imagery and the alliterations that just flowed so well. BOL in the contest and Congratulations on POTD! ~Charlie
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:19 AM
"Charlie, your words of kindness and feedback mean the world to me. I am grateful for your support and appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts."
Meadows Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 1:53 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:21 AM
"Jeanette, I want to express my sincere gratitude for your kind words. Your encouragement means a lot to me. Thank you."
Empress Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 1:22 AM
Congratulations on receiving POTD dr sotto. Well deserved
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:22 AM
"Dear Ink, I want to express my sincere gratitude for your kind words. Your encouragement means a lot to me. Thank you support."
Jones Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 1:03 AM
Congrats Dear on potd.
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:24 AM
"Karen, thank you for your words. I truly appreciate it.
Cunningham Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 12:52 AM
What great imagery you've used in your verse Lasaad, congratulations to to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Poet Avatar
December 10, 2023 at 7:27 AM
"Tom, I want to thank you for your kind words. Your comment is truly appreciated."
Lamoureux Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 9:03 AM
Based on the title I thought this would be a fun read. You did not disappoint. Bravo my friend.
Andresen Avatar
December 9, 2023 at 7:24 AM
- Many beautiful metaphorical lines ... the china-white grave left a strong impression ... an opera of wisteria ... incense strands of aurulent rimes ... etc. ... an impressive poem, Las :) - Hope it brings you top place in the contest, good luck :) - hugs
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