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Violin

Untouched by the caress of a bow, The instrument lies mute, voiceless A song slumbers on the strings, will the player show? An adept touch is what is sought Until then, silence is the only tune. Who will take it over that lilting bridge, Over deep waters in rhythmic flow The silence must be broken... Then, as she approaches, the strings tremble, Her caress is what it longed for Bow meets strings, and a concerto begins A melody drifts across the water, The long awaited caress is magical 4-19-2023 Writing Challenge - 'V' Words Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 5/21/2023 7:24:00 AM
Congrats . I am sure this has to be on the winner list
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Date: 5/1/2023 11:40:00 PM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 4/24/2023 10:25:00 AM
Wow. Love this. A fave
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Date: 4/24/2023 4:56:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 4/23/2023 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win in the Contest .. Joseph.
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Date: 4/23/2023 1:51:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations on your winning poem, Joseph :) - hugs
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Date: 4/22/2023 11:19:00 PM
A poem made magical with the deft handling of the poet as music with the magical touch of rehearsed hands on a violin. Beautiful. Congratulations Joseph on your first place win.
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Date: 4/22/2023 9:12:00 PM
"An adept touch is what is sought Until then, silence is the only tune" - A very beautiful concept on the violin. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/22/2023 7:12:00 PM
Congratulations Joseph:)
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Date: 4/22/2023 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Violin" is a beautiful write. I can hear the music. Have a blessed weekend.......
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Date: 4/22/2023 11:48:00 AM
Sweet beginnings. Congratulations on your win Joseph! :)
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Date: 4/22/2023 9:59:00 AM
Wow! Joseph, What a well-written write on the chosen word. I enjoyed this very much. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a great day and weekend;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/20/2023 6:06:00 AM
Then, as she approaches, the strings tremble, Her caress is what it longed for--awesome poem throughout, Joseph.
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Date: 4/20/2023 2:49:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Joseph ... yes, it sounds magical - Best wishes :) - hugs
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Date: 4/20/2023 12:58:00 AM
Awesome writing, Joseph:)
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Date: 4/19/2023 7:43:00 PM
This is great writing, Joseph. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 4/19/2023 7:05:00 PM
Silence in golden at times, but not at this moment. This is so beautifully written from the violin's point of view. I can almost hear the melody, as she begins to play. Your thoughts curl softly around me. Hugs, Brandy
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