Valentine Promises

Poor Max got himself in quite a fix
Sent the same card to more than one chick
His promises to wed
To disaster they led
His sad story now out on Net Flicks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bailey Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 5:44 PM
Very funny! Nice write.
Fraser Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 2:27 PM
Many congrats Barbara on your fine win in Francine's contest....:)
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:09 PM
lol! Congrat's on your big win, Barb. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your worthy poem's honored Place. Agape, Moses
Calhoun Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:14 AM
Hi Barbara - Congratulations on your WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Johnson Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 10:24 PM
Really a delightful limerick Barbara. Copngratulations. Love, joyce
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Yours was one of the funniest stories told in this contest. Very imaginative, Barbara. Congratulations.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:36 PM
Congrats BG on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest .. enjoy another chart topping poem with luv..
Roberts Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 6:17 PM
congrats on your sixth place win in my Valentines day contest
George   Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 8:33 PM
Good one, Barbara, Lainie.
Devonshire Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Oh, you funny, funny lady! When I first started dating my late husband, he had 3 girlfriends and bought each of us the same gift for Christmas. I asked him if they were cheaper by the dozen. Maybe Max got a discount for a lare order. But shame on him for the promises to wed. He deserves to be on Net Flicks. Definitely a winner you have hear, dear LNC. We leave for Tallahassee in the morning - picking up DaneAnn on the way. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:30 PM
Super BG .. original and unique luv.. good luck in the contest.. Net Flix does get everything first nowadays...good one..
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 3:02 PM
ahhaha, this is clever. Love Net Flicks line!
Muzzey Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Wonderful and funny write, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest although I think it is a winner. Caryl
Fraser Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Oo I hope he sold the movie rights. Koolio Limerick Barbara > good luck in the contest....:)
La France Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Very cute limerick on valentines, a surre winner~~
Babcock Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 9:47 AM
HA HA he made to many promises that he couldn't keep the poor baby. Got busted did he. Good one. God Bless Phyl
Pettit Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 8:26 AM
You made all the pieces of the puzzle fit nicely in this limerick. Good job.
Falotico Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 7:08 AM
lol....excellent !!!! smiles are gleaming from this witty write....luv Michael
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