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The miracle The beauty The scene By the atheist No less seen The masterpiece Without a master 11.29.18 For Anthony Slausin's The Atheist - Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/16/2020 8:41:00 PM
Happened to chance upon this one tonight. More relevant and potent than ever. Bravo, Maureen! :) gw
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/17/2020 7:24:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. Reading this again, made me think, the state of our planet suggests we are the masters of our own fate... maybe a poem coming ;), tho my brain is awfully foggy these days. Warm hugs my friend, xomo
Date: 1/16/2019 6:41:00 PM
Hi Maureen, I wish for a miracle, I wish for beauty, I wish to be a masterpiece, very well written my dear. take care....Vera
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 1/17/2019 8:31:00 AM
I like that :) you are! (I know Peter would agree) Thank you Vera, xomo!
Date: 12/18/2018 1:03:00 AM
Ha! Very witty. Love it
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/18/2018 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Marugu :)) xomo!
Date: 12/1/2018 11:06:00 PM
This is such succinct brilliance. Captures the subject perfectly. There isn't a podium high enough for this one. A FAVE for me. Bravo. :) gw
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/2/2018 12:29:00 PM
You make me blush my liege ;) thank you so much <3 xomo!
Date: 11/29/2018 11:50:00 PM
I love this. Thought provoking, then clicking and working - that's what your write did for me. Deep and good and good and deep. All the best ... CayCay
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/30/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank you do much CayCay! Lovely new pic <3 xomo!
Date: 11/29/2018 9:45:00 PM
This is the fittest example of 'Gaagar mein Saagar'. :-)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/30/2018 7:46:00 AM
Wow thank you Devansh! :) xomo
Date: 11/29/2018 6:26:00 PM
Maureen, great write for the contest, so creative, best of luck ~
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/30/2018 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Dear Heart :) xomo
Date: 11/29/2018 1:54:00 PM
This speaks volumes to me Maureen.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 2:10:00 PM
I'm elated, thank you! :) xomo
Date: 11/29/2018 1:38:00 PM
..."pay no attention to the ....... behind the curtain"....
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 1:48:00 PM
Lol! Brings to mind a cheesy movie quote: "God is an astronaut, Oz is over the rainbow..." Nightbreed ;) xomo!
Date: 11/29/2018 12:49:00 PM
So true, I wrote a monoku saying how God is so humble he doesn't sign his name at the bottom of a sunset! Nicely done!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 1:45:00 PM
I found it, the perfect accompaniment to this piece! :))) Thank you! xomo
Date: 11/29/2018 11:55:00 AM
I think you came up with the perfect explanation. Nice one.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Chris!! :))) xomo!
Date: 11/29/2018 10:22:00 AM
Well, I do believe you have created a brilliant little masterpiece there in your own right, Maureen, a total winner . . . ; )
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 10:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Indiana! I hope he likes it ;))) xomo!
Date: 11/29/2018 10:13:00 AM
Brilliant twist... LOVE the way you worded this!! ;)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thank You Rhona! :))) xomo <3
Date: 11/29/2018 9:43:00 AM
Nice
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thank you Mike :) xomo
Date: 11/29/2018 9:09:00 AM
Wow, Maureen, I love this! How can you look around or even into our inside world and not see the Creator!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 9:14:00 AM
"Awe" is for everyone ;) Thank you Kim! xomo
Date: 11/29/2018 9:06:00 AM
yes...the universe is both sound and chamber
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 9:11:00 AM
I like that :) xomo
Date: 11/29/2018 9:04:00 AM
Excellent Maureen ..a masterpiece indeed!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/29/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! :))) xomo

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