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Uncertainties

I swam in a river of uncertainties,
as Mr moon gave me his back.
Somber dreams caress my skin,
the light within my eyes is dark.
On my last trip to the milky way,
I was sad, because it had melted.














2-20-19
Resubmitted:12/09/2021
Alexis Y.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 12/15/2021 3:23:00 PM

Dear Alexis, sadness and beauty coexist in harmony upon your creative page. Your expressive poem inspires my heart’s imagination with its melancholy imagery. Congratulations for your lovely poem being honored with POTD. A wonderful and worthy choice. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/13/2021 7:22:00 AM

A very belated congratulations on your POTD. I have so many worries with the Bank i Malta and Sunday and today were feast. I am praying for patience until I resolve my problems. Well done and my apologies.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/12/2021 11:41:00 PM

This is beautiful Alexis. Congratulations on your POTD honor. Blessings xxoo

Gary Radice

Date: 12/11/2021 11:18:00 PM

Great to see an older poem being recognized Alexis and congratulations on POTD. Cheers - Gary

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/11/2021 7:28:00 PM

"Uncertainties" ... certainly are a part of life. However, facing them with a positive outlook, will help you get through them, so much easier. I am so happy that this older poem has been recognized, Alexis. Congratulations on Poem of the day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/11/2021 4:12:00 PM

Amazing, Alexis. How often do you travel to the Milky Way, anyway?! Can I come with one time? ... Just don't want to melt, ok? ... Congrats on POTD, my friend. Season's best, Gershon

Debra L Brown

Date: 12/11/2021 3:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, Alexis

Joseph May

Date: 12/11/2021 11:15:00 AM

Congrats on POTD Alexis

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/11/2021 10:33:00 AM

An interesting write , sad and beautiful at the same time...Am happy you reposted this old poem of yours, so that we are able to read it...Congratulations on your well deserved POTD dear Alexis...Hugs...~ Ani

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/11/2021 9:34:00 AM

Very fantastic piece of poem. There's beauty of contradictions and universal change. Congratulations!

Jenna Logan

Date: 12/11/2021 9:31:00 AM

I'm so happy for you, Alexis. Our earlier poems deserve to be dusted off and reposted. So many on site now have never read those 'oldie but goodie' creations. Congrats to you on this one!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/11/2021 8:48:00 AM

WoW! Everyone, I am in total shock that this oldie got poem of the day. It got p.o.t.d when I first wrote it nearly three years ago. Milt told me about the blog Gary Radice wrote about reposting old poems, I did and this is what happened. Getting the poem of the day for the same poem is such a good feeling. I am humbled by it. Thanks to all that commented on it. Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis

Ann Peck

Date: 12/11/2021 8:40:00 AM

I love your poem, Alexis! It describes our changing world perfectly. Congratulations on POTD!!

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2021 8:50:00 AM

Hi Ann, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by to congratulate me. Have a great weekend:-)Alexis

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/11/2021 8:04:00 AM

Back to say CONGRATULATIONS on your P.O.T.D. honor. Sweet!

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2021 8:54:00 AM

WoW! Milt, I am happy you told me about Gary’s blog. I reposted this poem and it was honored poem of the day then and now. Thanks for telling me about the blog and for congratulating me. In a way, you share this honor. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 12/11/2021 7:00:00 AM

Alexis, a sad but beautiful poem and congratulations on the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/11/2021 6:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "UNCERTAINTIES" is a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away................

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/11/2021 6:15:00 AM

Congratulations Alexis on your POTD!! What a beautiful poetic expression !!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/11/2021 5:07:00 AM

many congrats on a very well deserved POTD, only uncertainty for me is when my muse will return:-( hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/11/2021 4:47:00 AM

Back with congrats on POTD, Alexis. Enjoy your day.

Valsa George

Date: 12/11/2021 4:22:00 AM

Swimming in the river of uncertainties viewing the shore ahead ! The enigma of life, well expressed. Congratulations on your POTD

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/11/2021 3:29:00 AM

Congratulations Alexis on your quiet trippy POTD, reminds me of the Beatles lyrics, back in their psychedelic years, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/11/2021 3:00:00 AM

‘River of uncertainties’ ~ :) congrats on POTD, Alexis!

Lin Lane

Date: 12/11/2021 2:27:00 AM

Dream or a nightmare if the Milky Way melted. Even more sad if it was YOUR candy bar! Congratulations on your potd, sweet Alexis.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/11/2021 12:56:00 AM

Words of wisdom Alexis, nothing in life is certain, but we always hope for the best. Congrats on your POTD, enjoy the honour and weekend.. Tom

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2021 8:42:00 AM

WoW! Tom, This is a old poem I wrote nearly three years ago. Gary Radice wrote a blog about reposting old poems( Milt told me about it). I got p.o.t.d. in Feb of 2019. You were the first to say congrats then and the first to say congrats today. I appreciate your continued support. Have a great weekend:-) Alexis