True Story: Twist and Shock

Canoeing on the Tomoka River
     A cool spring day with gulls leading in line
My male companion had never canoed
     So the powerful paddling chore was mine

Heaving breathlessly I rowed us along
     Attempting to transport us far upstream
It was then quite a shock came from the blue
     A startling splash down my back made me scream

My friend jumped and nearly toppled the boat
     I rose carefully and turned ‘round to find
A mullet jumped into my rented canoe
     It twisted and flopped to escape its confines

This event preceded my fishing days
     And I was happy when the fish flew out
This was the first fish that I’d ever caught
     No reel, no hook, and bait I did without

Years later I bought a cabin cruiser
     Because seafood is tops on my menu
Many days offshore with nary a bite
     Maybe I should have purchased a canoe


*True story for Nikko's Twist and Shock contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 12:56 PM
I'm laughing so hard this was a terrific read.Loved it Carolyn.Keep an eye on my poems cause I'm sending big Thankyou's for all my winning comments.Teresa
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 10:00 PM
Good one, Carolyn. how are you in the middle of this week? congratuations here too. Luv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Many congratulations Carolyn on your win in Nikko's fine contest. I read on the net of a Barracuda leaping out of the water and latching itself on to a young girls arm. What a mess it made of her arm >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:45 PM
Congrats on your win, Carolyn
K. Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 10:07 AM
What a cool way to catch a fish, Carolyn! Must have been such a cool shock though! -enjoyed this one and congrats on being one of my winners! -- nikko :)
Goff Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 10:02 AM
Carolyn... the uproar these days up here is the eventual arrival of the "flying carp" tales like yours will be common! hahaha!!!! jimbo
Fraser Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 1:20 PM
Wonderful true story Carolyn, no wonder you so enjoy fishing. You can lure them into your canoe without tackle. Good luck in Nikko's contest >> James
Lacey Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 1:37 PM
so much for that fish! lol
Neels Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Enjoyed your write tonight Carolyn, all the best for the contest as well, love Wilma
Flach Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Great story. I happen to be a kayak man myself - but never had a fish jump in with me. I hope you went back and got your companion - or maybe not since he bailed out on you! Thanks for sharing this tale with us in rhyme. Joe
Culverhouse Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 1:18 AM
funny!! My husband and his brother were night fishing and had a gar jump in the boat but thought it was a snake in the dark...they almost shot a hole in the boat!!
Johnson Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Great entry Carolyn. It so nice to be back in the Soup again. My computer went in for repair and just came home last night. Things were moving so fa. contests were begun and ended while I was out of the loop. Thanks for your nice comments on my limerick. Love, Joyce
Knop Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 6:50 AM
What a story, Carolyn! So yue were lucky that time! I never did canoeing, but love to raw in a rawing boat, though had no chance to practice that for quitea time. Thanky you for your recent comments and best of luck for Nikko's contest. Have a look at my facebook pics and poems! All the best and have a nice week!...Love, Gert
George   Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 5:17 AM
Good one! Carolyn. Great entry! Best wishes and thank you for your comments on 'The Captain's Log. Love, Lainie
Loving Iii Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 5:33 PM
that cowardly guy in the boat could have easily been me. jhl
Bailey Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 4:33 PM
A riveting story. Nice write! Thanks for reading my poetry.
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