To Hunt the Bugaboo

With the morning crisp and frosty
    and the Earth yearning for autumn's heat.
Darkness gave way to a fractured dawn
    as the Sun rose in the East.
The forest became warm and fervent
    while dappled grass lay beneath his feet.

The Hunter gazed upon the forest
    to see old Walden's pond.
And positioned at the water's edge,
    he looked to the sky beyond.
Where he hoped to shoot a flock of Ducks
    before they could respond.

When overhead he saw a Duck
    who landed near the shore.
The Hunter knew to bide his time
    as he hoped for many more.
The Duck would be his decoy
    which had worked the day before.

The Duck swam lazily around the pond
    but something was not right
And heard a rustle in the grass
    and thought it might take flight.
When it saw a cap the Hunter wore
    which was orange and far too bright.

The Duck went through its options
    and considered a different deed.
And swam towards the Hunter
    who was hiding in some reeds.
'Come out and show yourself,'
    the Duck in voice decreed.

'What is your plan?' the Duck implored
    while the Hunter rose in shock.
'To bide my time,' the Hunter said. 
    'While waiting for your flock.'
'If that's the case,' the Duck replied. 
    'We should have a talk.'

'I'm loath to tell you of a Beast
     who lives and hunts beyond the rise.
And though his howl is quite submissive,
    it masks a fearsome size.
And no man has lived to tell the tale,
    which should come as no surprise.'

'Tell me about this Creature?'
    The Hunter said in haste.
'For if the Beast lives and breathes,
    there is no time to waste.
For I vow before the night is through...
    it will be salted to my taste.'

'So if you think you're the man
    to slay this dreadful Beast.
Not taken to fear and panic
    where your valor will decrease.
I will take you to that place
    where the Bugaboo does feast.'

The Hunter now had a great desire
    to travel and pursue.
Where no effort would seem too great
    for the chance to slay the Bugaboo.
And gather fame and fortune
    before the day is through.

The Hunter followed close behind
    while the Duck would lead the way.
In hopes to bag a Bugaboo
    before the end of day.
His only thought was to its size
    and what the Beast would weigh?

They traveled far into the forest
    where the Hunter had not been.
With plants and trees of monstrous size
    with all different shades of green.
They walked and tramped throughout the day
    but no Bugaboo was seen.

'Are you sure you know the way?'
    Said the Hunter to the Duck.
'I will admit,' the Duck replied. 
    'It takes a bit of luck.
But I think we're close to its feeding grounds
    where Bugaboos run amok.'

The Duck now spoke in whispered tones,
    'Let me check your gun and sight.
You will have but a single chance
    before the Beast takes flight.
And if you miss, the time is late,
    he will eat us in the night.'

The Duck froze in its tracks,
    its body wrought with fear.
It turned slowly towards the Hunter,
    'The Bugaboo is near.'
But all the Hunter could see
    was a small white tailed Deer.

'Behind the Deer, the Bugaboo stands,'
    said the frightened Duck.
'You will kill the Beast if you fire now
    at the grazing Buck.
So please be quick or our lives are lost
    if the Creature is not struck.'

The Hunter fires and the gun explodes
    to make a ghastly sound.
For the Duck had plugged the barrel
    with some stones that it had found.
The Duck now turned to see the Man
    who lay dead upon the ground.

It was not proud of the deed
    but thought it had been right.
To protect its friends and family
    from the wrath of the Hunter's might.
But now the Duck must hurry off
    as Bugaboos feast at night.


                       The End


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Smith Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Fell for this one. A fisherman could not have reeled me in any better. Keep on casting your net. Regards David in NZ
Romios Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 11:22 AM
David, I never saw thi one..marvelous Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 8:04 PM
A great story! Congrats on POTD! In my mom's house it was the "rag man"
Mchattie Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 4:23 PM
The Bugaboo is a scary creature somewhat similar to the boogeman. Also a mountain range and a park in British Columbia. Plus. I just like the name. My grandmother used to use it in stories when I was young. Have a great day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Hello David, okay..... What is Bugaboo? Did you make it up? i enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend.
Wood Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 8:26 AM
A very fun tale. Thank you for sharing and Congratulations on POTD recognition.
Mchattie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Dean. I do love to spin a tale. Have a great day.
One Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 12:24 PM
You have a great way of telling a story.. congrats on POTD..
Mchattie Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 11:07 AM
Thanks O Silent one. I was pleasantly surprised.
Kitchin Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 4:48 AM
David, congratulations on POTD with your dark tale, I really like the ending, very well done!
Mchattie Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 10:16 AM
Thanks Tania. I was very surprised considering all the other great poetry on the Soup. Have a great day.
Romios Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 4:03 AM
You see David! Long poems do work! It shows your knowledge of the English language and you are a poet first class. Your use of imagery, etc is outstanding. You know I loathe code writing. Our Language if far too beautiful. So proud of you. WOW Panagiota
Mchattie Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 10:13 AM
Thank you once again for your support my friend. Have a great day.
Pederson Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 10:39 PM
keep your pens filled with ink. drive on..
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Will do my best. Have a great day my friend.
Proxenos Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:35 PM
David - wow - I thought my poems were long - this is a beauty - congratulations on being bestowed with the honour of POTD - Love your poem, absolutely mesmerized! Hugs, Jennifer
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:50 PM
Thank you Jennifer. Have you ever read Lewis Carroll or Edward Lear? Now there are some long poems. Have a great day.
Williams Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:34 PM
What a whimical poem. I've never read a tale so smart. Its really good.Congrats on your POTW.
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:47 PM
Thank you for the kind words. Stay well.
Nicole Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:15 PM
You are amazing at creating the moment. Smart Duck!!! I am sure he captures all the Hunters this way!! :) Your thoughts bring a smile. Watch Out for that Bugaboo!!! Congratulations David, on Poem of the Day!! ~ Brandy
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:46 PM
Thanks Brandy. Sometimes I fear there is a bugaboo around every corner just waiting for me. Have a great day.
Wanter Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:25 AM
I love it! I love it! Challenging reading, but worth it! A fav! Congratulations!
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:49 AM
My wife complains my poems are too long. But what can you do? The story takes you where the story takes you. Stay frosty my friend.
Awtry Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 9:28 AM
What a great story! I was spellbound! Congratulations on POTD honors!
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:47 AM
Than you very much. I'm happy you enjoyed it. As you know, you write this stuff and think no one will care. But they do. It's a wonderful feeling. Have a great day.
La France Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 9:05 AM
David, congrats on POTD with this awesome story writing ~
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:46 AM
Thanks Dear Heart. I do love to spin a tale. Have a great day.
Lindley Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 8:56 AM
I absolutely love this finely crafted tale and especially so its great ending. Gives one pause to consider life is precious regardless of its carrier...Of course true as well, even a Bugaboo has to eat too.. A fav... a true delight my friend..
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:45 AM
Thanks. As a rule, hunting never ends well for the Duck. I just wanted to even the odds, Stay frosty my friend.
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 8:38 AM
- A great story - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., David :) - Anne-Lise :)
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:43 AM
Thank you. This is quite an honor for a humble poet. Have a great day.
Warrior Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 7:52 AM
You are quite the story-teller! David...Epic in proportions...I ran out of popcorn...Congrats!!! on your POTD!!!...and a Bugaboo to you lol...happy story endings...^WW^...{*J*}
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Thanks O Great Winged Warrior. My Grandmother used to tell us the Bugaboo would get us if we didn't fall a sleep as quickly as possible. Stay frosty my friend.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Duck 1, hunter 0 ;) Awesome! Ridiculously fun write David, congratulations on POTD! xomo
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:38 AM
Thanks Maureen. Like most people who write poetry, I am always amazed at the possibility a blank piece of paper can hold. Have a great day.
Cunningham Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 3:04 AM
What a clever duck lol Enjoyed your verse David. Congratulations on POTD. Tom
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Thanks Tom. Up until Gershon mentioned it, I never new it was a thing. I'm honored. Have a great day.
Wolf Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 2:21 PM
David, another sparkling gem of a story. Another FAVE. Should be/have been POTD, as should have been 'The Pig and the Horse.' Judges have lost their bearings. Get thee an agent and get these published, while the 'gettin's good!' Bravo! ` gw
Wolf Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 2:25 PM
David, I guarantee you that I have absolutely ZERO pull around here. In fact, I would put my pull in the negative numbers. For sure. I simply write what my heart sees. And this great narrative was richly deserving of POTD. (I will say that I totally trust my instincts, however.). Congrats, my friend. ~ gw
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:31 AM
Gershon. You seem to have some pull around here. Nice call. Stay frosty my friend.
Kiser Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 1:52 PM
Ooh, that duck got even for every animal that was ever killed by a hunter. Clever duck.
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:29 AM
To be a true sport, the animals and birds should have guns too. This was my way of just making the game more fair. Stay well.
Rose  Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 6:20 AM
Wow that was some story. You had me riveted from start to finish. Very creative poetry dear poet. I hope you have more of these. Thank you for sharing, and thanks for reading my poetry. Nice to meet you. Have a great day.
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:25 AM
I hope to be here for a very long time. Thank you for the kind words. I'm a fan of yours. Have a great day.
Michael Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 3:33 AM
Man...You write well...Lovely style
Mchattie Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Arturo. I'm a Lewis Carroll clone. Have a great day.
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