Time

Time

Time, like age, just an ordered number, not ordained
Place marker in human chronicles of sunrise and sunset plains –
Book mark for seasons and blue moon tides
Flags the divisions between light and darkness 
In twilight and dawning,
Powerless to stop Orion from appearing – the Southern Cross ascend,
Blocked from sneaking into infinity or the soul
At one with an eternal childhood escaping age,
No breaking in to steal the elliptical vitality of gifts
Or untarnished giftedness 
Seen and begotten in full view before the abyss -
Locked out of the continuum of eternal light
Sun, moon and fiery orbs absent source of birthright
Beyond the vortex speed of light;
Soul living in the presence of the perfect circle -
No beginning and no end for grace -
Past the hands of manmade divisions circling on a numeral face
Not hearing rhythmic ticking rhythms – echoes lost in perpetuity –
Where time and seasons, blue moons only watch 
Like forgotten keepsakes
Time, like age, just an ordered number, not ordained.

11-15-20
Contest: T Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Sam, wonderful writing and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "T" Contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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November 11, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Many thanks and much gratitude coming your way Constance! I loved your word prompts! It is an honor to share the podium with so many rich, profound and beautiful poems. Thank you for your placement and for all that you do here on the soup! Sending you the blessings of the season in beauty and serenity!
Evans Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations, Sam! Yes, time just passes by to many without even sharing a minute with Him.
Kauffman Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 10:13 AM
Hi Marilene, many thanks coming your way! As time slowly and silently (other than my alarm clock) slips through our fingers like sand we do forget to share each minute with our Creator and eternal lover in perpetual conversation! As Brother Laurence put it - living in the presence. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings for your classes and your holidays!
Alex Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 6:43 AM
I enjoy your poems. This is one of them. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Hi Chris! Much gratitude and many thanks. Knowing that you enjoy my poems brings me such joy! I am so happy that you like this one. It is kind of special to me. Sending you timely blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 12:51 PM
Yes, it is all up to the person and their relationship to our Savior. Congrats on your winner. Sara
Kauffman Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 10:07 AM
I keep thinking about the song looking for love in all the wrong places and the way so many people ignore the invitation to come close to God's amazing love. Thank you so much for your congratulatory note, your visit and your supportive messages. I especially love sharing our faith!
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January 20, 2021 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations Sam, a well deserved placement in Brian Strand’s contest. I really enjoyed this awesome write, time is not ordained, it’s a mystery that can’t be explained... Belle
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January 21, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Thank you so much Belle for your congratulations and your wonderful message. Time is an awesome theme for poets - so many ways to go with it, and, an endless source of inspiration! So glad you liked this poem! Blessings! All the best of "time" to you.
Hamilton Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:13 PM
What an excellent write, congrats Sam on your win!
Kauffman Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Thank you so much John. The theme of this poem led to many moments of contemplation on Time. So appreciative of your placement and your ongoing supportive comments. New Year's blessings to you!
One Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 5:46 AM
Sam this is a brilliant poem and was perfect for my contest, however, I could not place you, because you mentioned your name.. Sadly it is against Poetry soup rules.. So sorry Sam.
Kauffman Avatar
November 19, 2020 at 9:41 AM
I cannot believe I did that! I try to be so careful but that was careless. The quote comes from a book I am writing - Look What I Did with Sarah and Elizabeth - The Joy of a Titus Ministry! Thank you for your message. I so appreciate it! It really made my day! Loved the theme of your contest. Thank you for the opportunity to write on it. All the best.
Callus Avatar
November 17, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Sam, your skillful take on 'time' is most impressive, especially the metaphoric side of it. Hoping to see this on the winners' list. Regards // paul
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November 17, 2020 at 11:15 AM
I am so honored by your message Paul especially coming your skillful pen. Deeply grateful for your visit and your words. Thank you for taking the time to read this poem. It was quite a journey for me. I hope all is well with you. All the best!
Ashley Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 6:36 PM
My dear rhyme Time friend, your profound pen spills ink sublime unto the page, entwined with potent metaphorical beauty divine! Sam, every line a treasure in this exquisite poem so full of artistic and deep imagery from your gifted pen and admirable mind. Your talent shines with brilliance, dear poetess, dear friend. Best wishes for a win, Sam, and warmest wishes and hugs for you.. ~Susan
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November 17, 2020 at 11:25 AM
A rhyme in time from my rhyme time friend - a treasure all the time. My gratitude entwined with my humble joy at each line of your message. I have learned so much about rhymes, and the sublime, each time I read your divine lines. Forever grateful dear friend, dear poetess, for this gift. Sending you prime blessings and a hug...
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November 15, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Wow, Sam, this is intoxicating like fine wine, I love the metaphor of the bookmark in the human endeavor to count time 'Seen and begotten in full view before the abyss' probaby stood out the most for me - sure to be a top winner!
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November 17, 2020 at 11:11 AM
Hi Michelle, I am so grateful for your message and all of the encouragement it gives me. Thank you many times over! I love that line. This was an amazing journey into one of my foundational philosophies. Thanks for coming with me! All the best to you! I love to read your creations!
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November 15, 2020 at 12:20 PM
Sam, you have an uncanny gift at taking a well worn subject such as time, faith, or nature, and breathing into it your original creativity. "Book mark for seasons and blue moon tides" stands out, as does "Past the hands of manmade divisions circling on a numeral face". Each line is deep and new and profound, yet resonates with the reader, for all humans deal with the essence of time sneaking by us, "marking the divisions between light and darkness". This is excellent writing, and a fave ~ John
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November 17, 2020 at 11:05 AM
I am deeply honored by your message dear friend! This poem, a labor of love as I was digging around in my mind for expression to what I thought and felt. I think too many people use time, and stages of age, to excuse themselves from life and fully living. And, when we try to live in the presence of our loving God, all of that simply falls away as there is no time nor age only the ever youthful spirit! I have to give all the credit to our God who never runs out of creativity! Grace and blessings to you!
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