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Just having some fun with my gift of rhyme and rhythm, just letting the words flow through as they will.

looking through mind’s eye as if in a trance perhaps due to circumstance or perchance the last dance then again on the fly without condescending blending all elements in sight I start to cry wolf wolf the fear has arrived disguised but still here feel the fear blowing in the winds of fate unknowing death seeks to end the lie just die bye bye die then come again with reason in another season to veer out of last dance trance to fly again in the universal wind

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Alexis Y.

Date: 4/12/2022 12:41:00 PM

WoW! Bill, These are some great rhymes. I echo what Mike said. Well done. Have a great day-Alexis

Bill Baker
Date: 4/12/2022 1:38:00 PM

Thanks, Alexis, I appreciate the comments from both of you. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Anil Deo

Date: 4/10/2022 8:14:00 AM

Yes, poet Bill. U had fun. A bit of rap, some Soul, even jazzy at the end: I see a serious message. We maybdie in some way, even as Adam & Eve the moment they disobeyed God. The universe will also never quite lose us: we exemplify recycled stardust . Shalom shalom PalmSun

Bill Baker
Date: 4/11/2022 1:46:00 PM

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and comments from a place of deep spirituality. It is always a joy to have you visit my poetry, Anil. Shalom Shalom my friend, Bill

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/9/2022 1:00:00 AM

Love your end rhymes Bill!

Bill Baker
Date: 4/9/2022 4:20:00 AM

Thank you, Caren, for always be so kind in your comments. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Mike Gentile

Date: 4/8/2022 6:59:00 AM

Bill, your running thoughts captivate! Indeed you do have a gift of rhythm and flow! Happy Friday !!

Bill Baker
Date: 4/8/2022 8:37:00 AM

Thanks for the kind words, Mike. It was an experiment, probably not my best form to write in, but I'll probably try it again from time to time. Have a great weekend my friend, Bill

Karen Croft

Date: 4/7/2022 2:22:00 AM

great play with your rhyme and rhythm. enjoyed reading!

Bill Baker
Date: 4/7/2022 8:02:00 AM

Thanks, Karen. An experiment in poetic form, very unstructured for me. Have a great day, my friend! Bill

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/7/2022 1:06:00 AM

Cute. You're lucky to have such a gift. I always find it difficult to rhyme.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/7/2022 8:00:00 AM

Before he was "Ali" the boxer Cassius Clay was the first person I thought actually though in rhymes as I do. I wasn't even a teenager yet and my thoughts were constantly in rhyme. By college time, I wrote my research paper in Oral Interpretation (2,500 words) in rhyme. Opps! The ego has arrived. my apologies for running on. Thanks for your comment, Victor. A poet friend from Texas, Bill

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/6/2022 7:18:00 PM

Bill, this poem has a worldwide quality to it. Magnificently penned, innovative, and thought-provoking! "Blowing in the winds of fate unknowing death seeks to end the lie," was my favorite line.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/7/2022 7:52:00 AM

A little unstructured, but by the last two verses, I got my second wind. :-) Thanks for your comments, Sotto. Your favorite line was the meat of the poem. Glad your enjoyed it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Debra L Brown

Date: 4/6/2022 6:54:00 PM

It's amazing where your mind will take you if you give it a chance to go. "Blowing in the winds of fate unknowing death seeks to end the lie," was my favorite line. Blessings ~ Debra

Bill Baker
Date: 4/6/2022 7:10:00 PM

Thanks, Debra. I just thought I'd give it free rain for once. Have a great day! Bill

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2022 11:51:00 AM

This poem has a universal feel Bill. Love the final line - "universal wind" indeed! Makes me think of the song "Save the last dance for me." Very unique and thought provoking! So glad you took a chance.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/6/2022 3:25:00 PM

Thanks, Sam. It doesn't seem to be working for many. lol That's okay, it is what it is. Have a great day! Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/6/2022 5:11:00 AM

Deep--insightful write, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/6/2022 7:28:00 AM

Thanks for the comment, Vijay. Different from my usual poetry. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/6/2022 3:23:00 AM

how marvelous to see how your mind was working today. Hopefully, reason will come in another season as you said. I liked this poem for the answers within it are blowing through your mind.

Bill Baker
Date: 4/6/2022 7:29:00 AM

Thanks for the interesting comment, Sara. Keeps me on my toes. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill