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Thoughts In Noir

On misted streets of fog and pain With lamp post lighted thoughts of rain The city, bleak in heart’s demise Is cold, as tears now taunt my eyes To walk in disappointment’s dawn The streets grow weary as I yawn Though every life must sometimes shade I contemplate decisions made And though we all know things must end And good things break and others bend It’s hard to fathom graying skies When promises are often lies Yet, something always fills the crack A light that somewhere has my back To lift the fog of morning chill And somehow reinstate my will

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Date: 3/14/2024 12:25:00 PM
Hello Gentle mike , i do agree with Sara. A well deserved POTW. And my fav. Happy Thursday. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2024 5:03:00 PM
Hello, Mike, you are welcome. xxoo. /Darlene/
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Mike Gentile
Date: 3/14/2024 1:57:00 PM
Darlene, thank you so much xxoo
Date: 1/28/2024 2:39:00 AM
a well-deserved POTW, Mike. What a poignant line: It's hard to fathom graying skies when promises are often lies. Your poetry always as such a gentle flow.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/28/2024 6:04:00 AM
Thank you sweet Sara xxoo
Date: 1/28/2024 12:59:00 AM
Congrats on potw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/28/2024 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Silent One!
Date: 1/27/2024 3:38:00 PM
Achtung and ach du lieber! This is some Potw!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/28/2024 6:03:00 AM
Tom, thank you so much!!
Date: 1/27/2024 10:45:00 AM
Eloquently written enjoyed reading your work many blessings.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/27/2024 12:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Yolanda!!
Date: 1/26/2024 3:34:00 PM
Mike, this is just my kind of poem. Nicely metered and rhymed, slightly sad but ending with hope. Love your imagery, especially "To walk in disappointment’s dawn", and "To lift the fog of morning chill". Beautifully written and worthy of POTW. Well done.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/27/2024 12:27:00 PM
Thank you John for such a lovely compliment!!
Date: 1/26/2024 10:48:00 AM
The title, the atmosphere, the metaphors, the lies and most of all the uplifting ending all emotions are there. Congratulations on POTW Mike Gentile! Well-deserved.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/27/2024 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Anaya for your kind words xxoo
Date: 1/25/2024 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations Mike, on your poem of the week. Your final stanza is uplifting indeed. Best wishes. Brian
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/25/2024 11:54:00 AM
Thank you Brian!
Date: 1/25/2024 5:40:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on POTW!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/25/2024 6:44:00 AM
Thank you Kim xxoo
Date: 1/24/2024 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your work being POTW..Way to go. I like the way you laid this one out and very good rhyme. Sara K
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/24/2024 3:58:00 AM
Thank you Sara, Happy Wednesday xxoo
Date: 1/23/2024 12:45:00 AM
Deep musings, Mike. God does have our back if we trust and our faith is free from doubt. Warmest congratulations on POTW
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/23/2024 3:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Seeker!!!
Date: 1/22/2024 10:22:00 AM
A wonderful write in iambic tetrameter Mike. Great poem. Cheers - Gary
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2024 11:53:00 AM
Thank you so much Gary!!
Date: 1/22/2024 9:45:00 AM
Definitely a fav for me Mike. This piece is exceptional in every way. Congratulations on POTW! Linda :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2024 11:53:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much !!
Date: 1/22/2024 5:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! An extraordinary write with extraordinary emotion .... a little soul searching to start a new. Inspirational write! Paulette
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2024 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much Paulette xxoo
Date: 1/22/2024 2:40:00 AM
Congratulations on a fabulous potw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2024 3:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Karen!
Date: 1/22/2024 2:37:00 AM
Congrats on your POTW. Loved how you managed this poem.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2024 3:52:00 AM
Thank you Victor!
Date: 1/21/2024 5:34:00 PM
Dear Mike, back with my heartiest congrats for POTW honors awarded to this exceptional, poignant poem. Have a great week my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/22/2024 3:52:00 AM
Thank you Susan, a great week you as well!!
Date: 1/21/2024 3:08:00 PM
' A light that somewhere has my back, something always fills the crack.' This thought says it all for me. A perfect reminder that: at just the right moment, ( something or someone ) makes the pain or darkness disappear. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Mike, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/27/2024 3:39:00 PM
:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2024 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much sweet Brandy xxoo
Date: 1/21/2024 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTW, Mike! A FAV for my list, my friend. Powerful presentations of the emotions we all use to process life through. Perfect rhyming and my favorite rhyme scheme and a great closing line. Enjoy your special week of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2024 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Bill, I appreciate your kind words!
Date: 1/21/2024 9:18:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTW, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2024 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Vijay!!!
Date: 1/21/2024 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2024 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Richard !!
Date: 1/21/2024 6:35:00 AM
Mike, poetry such as you write can never be compensated enough by calling it potd or potw.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2024 8:09:00 AM
So sweet of you Lin, thank you xxoo
Date: 1/21/2024 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Mike, on POTW, it is a stark journey through misted streets of emotion. Your verses paint a vivid picture of heartache and contemplation, yet within the gloom, there's a resilient spirit. The acknowledgment of life's complexities and the hopeful undercurrent make this poem a compelling reflection on resilience and self-discovery. Blessings, Daniel
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2024 5:27:00 AM
Thank you Daniel for such a lovely compliment!!
Date: 1/21/2024 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Thoughts In Noir" write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win as you write away.....................
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2024 5:26:00 AM
Thank you Paula, Happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 1/21/2024 4:30:00 AM
Mike, well penned, there's always some hope to find, congratulations on POTW.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 1/21/2024 5:26:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania xxoo
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