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Thoughts

Winged messengers of the brain Ever in motion, never at rest The sneaking invaders of the quiet

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/24/2022 6:03:00 AM

I have to admit I understand this a lot more than I ever wanted to.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/22/2022 3:20:00 AM

My mind is static. Oh well. Old age.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/21/2022 9:38:00 PM

I agree with you 100 percent! ,Conversations with my brain which I wrote a week or so ago Hugs and blessingsj Jennifer

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/21/2022 8:13:00 PM

Yes! My feelings almost exactly. This really resonates, Valsa. Thank you, gw

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/21/2022 6:18:00 PM

Keep them coming dear friend..They will keep your ink bleeding. I am new to this form.

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/21/2022 4:18:00 PM

I know, lately I keep saying, sit down and rest, but without thinking I've got a pencil in my hand, scribbling away. Silence is so important for keeping one healthily grounded. Well said.

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/21/2022 1:56:00 PM

Vasal, could this be your guardian angel? I enjoyed your poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Anselmo Boles

Date: 2/21/2022 11:18:00 AM

A very creative description of the constant restlessness and confounding intense activity within the mind. Well thought out Valsa!...ab

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/21/2022 7:34:00 AM

Hi Valsa, I found these to be deep descriptive write-on thoughts. Well done. Have a nice a day-Alexis

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/21/2022 5:19:00 AM

Valsa, In just some words you grasp the most importnat features of the human brain and his lurking ways to invade our quitness. Blessings dear friend.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/21/2022 4:59:00 AM

Very original and descriptive: Winged messengers of the brain. You have a BIG reservoir of them prompting your creativity.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/21/2022 3:36:00 AM

Rightly said in a few, yet powerful words. Uncontrollable are these thoughts!! But there are ways to trick them - like poetry. I know you have the best weapon in your hands. Best wishes!!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/21/2022 3:28:00 AM

So true' and you have beautifully said that in a few words.... lovely...

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/21/2022 3:28:00 AM

So true' and you have beautifully said that in a few words.... lovely...

Anil Deo

Date: 2/21/2022 2:28:00 AM

That they be, Sis, that they be. If we don't meditate/ pray, thinking is another addiction. Bless u in Jesus