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I had a dream... I am sleeping on a cloud. Upon awakening, I gaze at planet earth below. From my vantage point I can see the globe in its entirety. Something has changed. Before falling asleep I was watching the news. It spoke of war, inflation, hatred and prejudice. There was talk of deforestation, desertification, plastic pollution and radiation poisoning. People were fighting, they were killing. Spilled blood was everywhere, staining the beauteous land. But the world I am seeing now is at peace. The lion sleeps with the lamb. People from all cultures, nations and languages are living in harmony, a true rainbow of mankind. The air is sweet, the waters pure and clear as crystal. Instinctively, I get down on my knees and pray to the God of heaven, as tears of confusion and joy stream down my face. A soft, low voice from above calls to me: "My son, no need for tears any longer. Look! I have made all things new." It is only then I understand, this is no dream after all. I am in paradise! promise of ages a world in transformation all living the dream

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Date: 4/11/2024 2:18:00 AM
A renewed earth, The Kingdom promised! Wootwoot! Loved every chosen word and phrase, painting a picture of the future. Till next time, Crystol
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/11/2024 5:17:00 AM
The kingdom indeed! Thx Crys
Date: 3/21/2024 10:58:00 AM
Evocative piece, Tom. Let's hope that dream of paradise is/was not just a dream, also.
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Date: 3/21/2024 1:05:00 PM
It's based on the promises of a God who cannot lie. Thx Jim
Date: 3/20/2024 6:59:00 AM
Hi Tom, Quick distillation of your poem: In a dream, the world's turmoil dissolves, replaced by a vision of unity and peace. Awakening to a transformed reality, the dreamer (Tom?) finds themselves in a paradise where harmony reigns and hope is restored. Enjoyed this one! Don
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/21/2024 1:05:00 PM
It's all about this (Matthew 5:5) and this (Revelation 21:3-5). Thx much
Date: 3/14/2024 2:15:00 PM
What a wonderful world song comes to mind.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/14/2024 2:37:00 PM
Write it!
Date: 3/14/2024 2:14:00 PM
Wow!. This should be pinned to every public place. The visuals are so strong. So full of truths, the bad and good. Yes this tired world I long for paradise, and the end of suffering and death.Promised and Soon to come. Well done, Pete,
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/14/2024 2:37:00 PM
Yes it is Pete. Not just a politician's pipe dream - Revelation 21:3-5
Date: 3/1/2024 6:23:00 PM
The most beautiful poem I enjoyed. Thanks a ton for such creative expression.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/2/2024 6:35:00 AM
And thx back for stopping by
Date: 2/27/2024 1:14:00 AM
A beautiful expression of what is promised for the near future and reminds me of Rev 21:3,4. :-D
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/27/2024 5:29:00 AM
Yes Natasha, that verse and many more
Date: 2/16/2024 9:50:00 PM
Hi Tom. This could form the foundation for a great 'guided fantasy' script prescribed for a well being relaxation therapy session - particularly so for those people who suffer with high levels of anxiety. Your narrative here is both positive and calming. Cheers - Gary
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/17/2024 5:53:00 AM
Ha! Maybe I missed my calling? Thx for visit Gary
Date: 1/20/2024 10:02:00 AM
Much to look forward too. I appreciate the scriptural relevance of this piece.
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Date: 1/20/2024 10:20:00 AM
Indeed. If it was only wishful thinking it would be meaningless
Date: 1/16/2024 7:27:00 AM
Hi Tom, This is a wonderful poem that suggests a parallel universe. I personally believe that every compassionate human being must do their part, no matter how small to make positive changes in our world during the time we each are given here and then God willing, we will see the lion lay down with the lamb.
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Date: 1/16/2024 6:49:00 PM
It's not a parallel universe at all. The changeover will occur right here, and sooner rather than later! Thx Nancy
Date: 1/15/2024 7:48:00 AM
Aww this is a very lovely haibun.. peace and harmony will be abundant in heavens indeed!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/15/2024 3:00:00 PM
And on earth when Jesus takes the reins. Thx for visit
Date: 1/13/2024 7:20:00 AM
Tom, your narrative style beckons a novel. Your poetry appears to have honed your pen for that mission.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2024 9:05:00 AM
I did write a children's book
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Date: 1/13/2024 9:04:00 AM
Just a simple, hopeful Haibun. Thx for visit
Date: 1/12/2024 10:56:00 AM
Hello Tom. The world is a continuous transformation true and yes we are all living the dream or at least trying to. Once again you deliver power and thought. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful night and weekend. Peace and Blessings and keep on dreaming (smile)
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/12/2024 1:27:00 PM
"When the new world is here, all will be one, on earth as in heaven above..." Quote from a beautiful song I know. Thx Lisa
Date: 1/8/2024 11:00:00 PM
We can only hope to see your vision fulfilled this year, Tom--if just a slice of it. God bless you.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2024 5:56:00 AM
Yessir and thx
Date: 1/7/2024 8:07:00 PM
Dear Tom: A very good write. Lovely! Leon
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/9/2024 5:56:00 AM
Appreciated Leon
Date: 1/7/2024 2:55:00 PM
Wonderful writing and so engaging! I love the photo too!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/7/2024 3:17:00 PM
Yes I was happy to have found it. So vibrant. Thx much
Date: 1/7/2024 2:05:00 PM
Yes, someday it will happen. We just don't know how long. I like your faith-based work. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/7/2024 2:06:00 PM
Your welcome and thank you
Date: 1/7/2024 5:34:00 AM
Your dream is certainly inspiring, my friend. I like the turn in your poem that dwells in peace and serenity in a world of goodwill--heavenly thoughts, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/7/2024 5:51:00 AM
Thx for visiting Woody's spot Veej
Date: 1/7/2024 4:47:00 AM
Oh, what a beautiful scene! I could feel myself wishing to be whisked there straight away. Hope it comes in our lifetime. One can only hope. Your wonderful Haibun reminded me of my video, The Dreamer. A very creative write Tommy and a fave for me...Hugs
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/7/2024 5:51:00 AM
Hope to see you and yours there Maria!
Date: 1/6/2024 5:20:00 PM
The meticulously constructed haibun captures the aromas of hope, belief, and deep significance. Enjoyed
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/7/2024 5:50:00 AM
Much thx lasaad
Date: 1/6/2024 1:52:00 PM
Indeed, so True is His Promise... which you have been given a glimpse of! Thank you...luv~
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2024 2:57:00 PM
Yes, Revelation 21:3-5. Thx
Date: 1/6/2024 6:17:00 AM
What a beautiful dream Tommy. I wrote a poem a couple years ago, "A City of Love" with a very similar theme. Perhaps one day we will all wake up in paradise. John
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2024 6:20:00 AM
John 11:25; Acts 24:15. It's guaranteed for many, John
Date: 1/5/2024 7:51:00 PM
Take me to that place called paradise, even if it's just for one day (lol) Very nice, Tom. Certainly, a dream we could all live with. Great haiku to end it!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2024 6:00:00 AM
A Dream that the Prince of Peace will bring to reality Charles. Sooner than many imagine. Thx
Date: 1/5/2024 7:04:00 PM
It would be truly like a paradise in reality if this dream comes true.. Where people are not distinguished on any basis and share a bond of togetherness based on humanity and love. I can't really watch news as what's been happening really shatters my heart. But this haibun, reflects the beautiful fragrances of hope, faith and meaningful essence.. Wow, dear Tom, I would too love to be in peace of this eden, when God has cleansed all the negativities and we inhale pure air of truths..a fav for me!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2024 6:01:00 AM
I hope you are there when Jesus makes it a reality Hiya. But first comes judgment
Date: 1/5/2024 6:44:00 PM
I am so looking forward to that day when we can all live in that paradise you speak of Woody :)
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2024 6:01:00 AM
We can, dear Rose. But faith in the One who will make the dream come true is required
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