Get Your Premium Membership

This Happy Memory

My first lover sang to me as she held my hand. I was innocent and shaking, for I did not know the things lovers do in the dark Having always been an excellent student I was willing to put in the hard work She placed my hand on bare breast, then whispered to me, "Do not be afraid, take your time." I must confess, her kindness was a pleasant surprise Delicate experienced hands guided me to the peak of my true hidden desires Such joy as I discovered her special places. She revealed to me mysteries, holding nothing back from my wanting lips and fingers Her the guide me the explorer, yet far from the first to discover her wilderness! For Broken Wings' "The Magic of Three" poetry contest. I have not had much experience with this form, I hope I have completed it properly. Written: January 12, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/27/2018 5:22:00 AM
Hi Richard, a wonderful, sensual write my friend. I don't think I have ever written in this form before. Well Richard, looks like congratulations are in order. Congratulations on your win my friend, with this wonderful, sensual, memory. A joy to read this morning Richard. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/15/2018 12:58:00 PM
Excellent Fibonacci, Richard. I have only written one...which is also a personification entitled (The Promise of Spring) I was written several years ago. Elaine
Login to Reply
Date: 3/9/2018 3:53:00 PM
Gosh! How did I miss this one, Richard!! Indeed a happy and unforgettable memory...a springboard to a pool of future experiences. Regards // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 2/13/2018 2:17:00 PM
Richard, congratulations on your win in my contest with this steamy write !
Login to Reply
Date: 2/13/2018 12:34:00 AM
A great Fibonacci, Richard, and I love the wry humour at the end. A worthy win. Regards, Viv
Login to Reply
Date: 2/12/2018 9:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Richard, very mmmm... yummy :) ! Great poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2018 8:14:00 PM
Richard, such an excellent, erotic and fun poem. You tell the story of your 'learning experience' well with a lush sweetness and subtle humor. Each stanza ends with really great lines as well. Totally enjoyed your trip down memory lane :)) Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2018 6:47:00 PM
Adorably osé. Well done, Richard. Congrats on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/3/2018 8:57:00 PM
My goodness Richard, what a beautiful, elegantly erotic, learning experience you evocatively describe and were so lucky to be part of - An explosive adventure with you the willing student. I enjoyed reading it. All the best for the contest ...Maria
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/4/2018 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Maria. :0)
Date: 1/24/2018 4:07:00 PM
Excellent, fun! Great contender! GL!!
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/4/2018 10:45:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 1/23/2018 11:19:00 AM
(: I have a poem that im not sure I can put I will let you read it soon not nasty or anything like that
Login to Reply
Date: 1/21/2018 4:40:00 PM
A beautiful and thrilling experience ...Very nicely expressed...
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/22/2018 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 1/15/2018 1:25:00 PM
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! The thermostat in my house busted because of this piece. Thanks. Off to Home Depot I go... :D
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 5:53:00 PM
Ha ha, thanks Drake. I added another line to each of the stanzas.
Date: 1/15/2018 9:49:00 AM
Very provocative work..If for a contest, it is a good contender..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 5:53:00 PM
Thanks Sara.
Date: 1/15/2018 4:42:00 AM
Wow! What a pleasant and sweet poem, Richard. I loved it. Hugs
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 9:11:00 AM
I’m pleased you enjoyed it Eileen.
Date: 1/15/2018 4:40:00 AM
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_lives_we_choose_545634 I haven't read your poem yet, but I did find the poem you asked me about. Aren't I smart....and lucky! :) Hugs
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 9:11:00 AM
What was the name? Thanks for finding it.
Date: 1/13/2018 8:30:00 PM
wowowow. What a great way to fibonnaci a GREAT memory. I too am using this form. hopefully soon will do it.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/13/2018 6:56:00 PM
Great memory!
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 5:54:00 PM
Thanks Anna.;0)
Date: 1/13/2018 6:07:00 PM
Well of course that's a memory that'll never leave you or fade. And why should it? Lol! Great memory Richard, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest! Hugs and smiles :)
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/15/2018 5:54:00 PM
Cute response, thanks Akkina.
Date: 1/13/2018 12:51:00 PM
Sweet! I am sure this would bring a smile to your face :) Memories can be treasures indeed.
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thanks Carol, I appreciate the visit.
Date: 1/13/2018 9:06:00 AM
wow love this one Richard, so glad I stopped by today! thanks for sharing ;) -luloo
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Luloo.;0)
Date: 1/12/2018 7:18:00 PM
What a wonderful memory.. very few are so lucky..best for a win, Richard.
Login to Reply
Lamoureux Avatar
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2018 12:10:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things