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The Witch Next Door

A misconception is the tale that witches wear such evil faces That we should dread October's spell or cloudy nights, and creepy spaces A wart-nosed witch that rides a broom is not the girl who lives next door who hides away, some lonely room She may be fair, she may be more Have you met a lonely ghoul who names her spiders Mold and Slime? Brewing potions, but is no fool We'll pass her by most every time Witches pass us by each day They don't play games of hide and seek Ghouls are clever and want to play and normal friends they want to meet The cauldron cleaned with spit and shine will brew a drink that's rather bold Prepared to hold a drink of wine Beware that it will knock you cold! She'll host a party, if you dare! Sweep misconceptions out the door You'll have a blast if you're prepared The witch is just a neighbor right next door! _________________________________________ For Alfred's Contest: Witchcraft 8/23/14

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Date: 8/29/2014 5:47:00 PM
Carrie, Most sincere congratulations on your win!! Your poem is succinct and extraordinarily articulated. The rhyming sequence is perfect in tone and pitch. The witch next door may be more common than we all think. October and Halloween will be here very soon!! And so, we all better get ready!! Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 8/28/2014 11:44:00 PM
Loved it Carrie, congrats.....Seren
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Date: 8/28/2014 10:46:00 PM
Nicely written Carrie and congratulations on you high marks. Sending a hug and a smile, Verlena
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Date: 8/28/2014 12:58:00 PM
Being the superb poet that you are, this piece is truly deserving of its high placement. Excellent write, my friend. Huge congratulations to you, Carrie! Pandita
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Date: 8/28/2014 10:46:00 AM
I agree nice win.SKAT
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Date: 8/28/2014 9:39:00 AM
nice win...PD
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Date: 8/28/2014 8:59:00 AM
Wow Carrie a fabulous write ! Big congrats on your super win!
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Date: 8/28/2014 8:12:00 AM
Very entertaining, congratulations Carrie.
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Date: 8/28/2014 1:29:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2014 3:05:00 AM
Sure to top the winner's list, Carrie. Lainie
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Date: 8/26/2014 11:47:00 AM
Very creative and well-done poem my dear friend Carrie. You write so well as always. I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Good luck in the contest though it's already a winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for enjoying and appreciating some of my latest poems. I'm both humbled and honored to know that you want a print of my humble house bless poem. Sure my friend, but you can edit/improve it if you want. Thanks a lot. Biggest sweet hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 8/24/2014 3:28:00 PM
A wonderful write, Carrie, a sure winner in the contest, well done ~~
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Date: 8/23/2014 10:38:00 PM
This is fantastic, Carrie. It does a great job of showing misconceptions people have of those who delve in spirit world. They may look quite ordinary...I still like to stay away...It's not a realm that I like to flirt with. Your rhyming is impeccable here. Wonderful write, my dear. I'm sure you will do well! :)
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Date: 8/23/2014 5:35:00 PM
I think I just got the "Carrie Treatment" If you wrote this for the contest, I expect a win.
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Date: 8/23/2014 3:51:00 PM
I think i will give the party invitation a miss - lovely imagery - great write good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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