The Witch Next Door

A misconception is the tale
that witches wear such evil faces
That we should dread October's spell
or cloudy nights, and creepy spaces

A wart-nosed witch that rides a broom
is not the girl who lives next door
who hides away, some lonely room
She may be fair, she may be more 

Have you met a lonely ghoul
who names her spiders Mold and Slime?
Brewing potions, but is no fool
We'll pass her by most every time


Witches pass us by each day
They don't play games of hide and seek
Ghouls are clever and want to play
and normal friends they want to meet

The cauldron cleaned with spit and shine
will brew a drink that's rather bold
Prepared to hold a drink of wine
Beware that it will knock you cold!

She'll host a party, if you dare!
Sweep misconceptions out the door
You'll have a blast if you're prepared
The witch is just a neighbor right next door!



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For Alfred's Contest: Witchcraft 8/23/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bateman Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 5:47 PM
Carrie, Most sincere congratulations on your win!! Your poem is succinct and extraordinarily articulated. The rhyming sequence is perfect in tone and pitch. The witch next door may be more common than we all think. October and Halloween will be here very soon!! And so, we all better get ready!! Best Wishes, Gary
Roberts Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 11:44 PM
Loved it Carrie, congrats.....Seren
Walker  Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Nicely written Carrie and congratulations on you high marks. Sending a hug and a smile, Verlena
Sietesantos Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 12:58 PM
Being the superb poet that you are, this piece is truly deserving of its high placement. Excellent write, my friend. Huge congratulations to you, Carrie! Pandita
A  Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 10:46 AM
I agree nice win.SKAT
A   Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 9:39 AM
nice win...PD
A. Sharma Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 8:59 AM
Wow Carrie a fabulous write ! Big congrats on your super win!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Very entertaining, congratulations Carrie.
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 1:29 AM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
George   Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 3:05 AM
Sure to top the winner's list, Carrie. Lainie
Gasun Avatar
August 26, 2014 at 11:47 AM
Very creative and well-done poem my dear friend Carrie. You write so well as always. I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Good luck in the contest though it's already a winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for enjoying and appreciating some of my latest poems. I'm both humbled and honored to know that you want a print of my humble house bless poem. Sure my friend, but you can edit/improve it if you want. Thanks a lot. Biggest sweet hugs! love lots, Leonora
La France Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 3:28 PM
A wonderful write, Carrie, a sure winner in the contest, well done ~~
Manassian Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 10:38 PM
This is fantastic, Carrie. It does a great job of showing misconceptions people have of those who delve in spirit world. They may look quite ordinary...I still like to stay away...It's not a realm that I like to flirt with. Your rhyming is impeccable here. Wonderful write, my dear. I'm sure you will do well! :)
Curtis Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 5:35 PM
I think I just got the "Carrie Treatment" If you wrote this for the contest, I expect a win.
Allison Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 3:51 PM
I think i will give the party invitation a miss - lovely imagery - great write good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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