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The Universal Puzzle

* foreign galaxies * * spin in the cosmos beyond the shore of understanding and * imagination * * telescoptic eyes search heaven.. * as if pilgrims charting new worlds * * * * * pioneers reaching out beyond stars * 'til the * pieces * * fit * * *

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Date: 10/25/2010 10:04:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2010 4:58:00 PM
What an EXCELLENT poem Carrie! I love the little stars which add to the enchantment of the wonder of the universe. I can easily see why your poem is in the winner's circle. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/18/2010 2:24:00 PM
Geeeezzzz just once maybe you won't be #1 in my book LOL (not today!) enjoyed muchly! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful win, Carrie
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Date: 9/17/2010 8:59:00 AM
A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:44:00 AM
nice one, congrats on your win
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Date: 9/17/2010 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:54:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on your awesome win in Rick's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 9/16/2010 8:49:00 PM
You know, if I didn't think I am going to find the answer to all that one day, it would drive me nuts. Congratulations on your nice wind. Charles
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Date: 9/16/2010 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations on 6th place with this creative poem, in my opinion this should be first place~~
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your fantastic win, Carrie!! Enjoy!! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/16/2010 3:15:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your big win in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 9/16/2010 2:32:00 PM
Congrats Carrie...I love the last bit..and the stars..Bg * * * * * * * *
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Date: 9/16/2010 1:21:00 PM
Congratulation's Carrie on your fine win in Rick's contest. I so love the artistry you have created, very clever >> James
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Date: 9/16/2010 12:41:00 PM
I like the concept of "a pilgrimate to unknown worlds" with "pioneers reaching out beyond stars" in an effort to understand the makeup of the universe, Carrie. Very creative layout with the stars as well! Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/10/2010 3:47:00 PM
Lovely done, Carrie and best of luck in the contest! I am just wondering would will be explored within the near future! Take care and have a great weekend!...Gert:)
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Date: 9/10/2010 1:32:00 AM
Extremely beautiful words sketching the shape of universe and your stars glittering like the real stars on this well painted and illustrated canvas of Poem and a lovely painting. It hold the heart to continue its quest for searching the heaven somewhere beyond. Your inner artist has shaped a painting without brush. Great work my friend. I have placed a new Poem on Ground Zero hope you would read it today. Good wishes for yr contest. Love and best wishes always .... Ravindra...Carrie Rich.
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:38:00 PM
"'Til the pieces fit." That's interesting. I've always thought of the whole "Big Bang" as an ongoing experiment. Will we ever understand? Luck in the contest. Great ending! Love, Dave
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Date: 9/9/2010 12:56:00 PM
A wondeful point when it comes to the universe. Lost in the image in hopes we will soon find out whats beyond the heavens. Connecting all space and reality, fixing this universe like a puzzle. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 9/9/2010 9:46:00 AM
So we are two astronomers, and in my telescope is another star, a poet of curiosity and wit. Enjoyed it
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Date: 9/8/2010 9:25:00 PM
Stunning entry with stars to accompany it Carrie, all the best for Rick's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 9/8/2010 8:07:00 PM
Beautifully done lLCarrie. I had trouble with this one. Soupmail. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/8/2010 7:28:00 PM
Great imagery, Carrie. Good luck in Rick's "Universe" Contest. ....Peace, Carrie
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Date: 9/8/2010 7:27:00 PM
YOu have an amazing mind, Carrie. And thoselittle stars around your poem. zowie!
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Date: 9/8/2010 7:26:00 PM
Wonderful write Carrie..good luck in Rick's new contest.. luv.. like the design effects..
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