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The Prismatic Self Premiere Contest Winner

The Prismatic Self Premiere Contest Winner I meet myself at the edge of mirror glass— its surface holds me like a verdict; renders me in symmetry I do not trust. Do I offer brilliance, or only repetition? Each submission a blade, each stanza a wound— I split myself into offerings, waiting for the weight of judgment. The axe does not ask, only answers. It falls, sharp with certainty—yes or no, seen or lost. They say to write without needing the prize. They say to shape words as though no eyes watch. But I know the truth, I know the weight of silence when applause does not come. When the page returns unmarked, unchosen, does my voice scatter? Does it find refuge in silence? Or does it slip between the cracks of forgotten names, an utterance untethered from the throat that birthed it? To be seen— more than light touching skin, more than voices in empty halls— to be taken in, held within the breath of another’s knowing. Yet, when we depart, one half vanishes. The other remains, staring into the instrument that divides, where the downward thrust of the unforgiving axe cannot be halted, where self regards itself and dares— one more time—to begin again. But the mirror does not forgive—it only reflects, only repeats. It does not carry memory, only expectation. Not the artist, only the artifact. I exist between—between creation and reception, between silence and shouts, between the glass and the ghost it holds. And in the aching hush of mirrormourn, where reflection weighs heavier than any word unspoken, I linger, knowing even my image will not remain. Footnote: mirrormourn Definition: (noun) The quiet sorrow felt when one's reflection—whether in a mirror or in the eyes of others—does not fully capture the depth of their being. A mourning of what is seen and what remains unseen.

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Date: 6/14/2025 4:31:00 PM
Mickey, congratulations on your first place win in the contest with this awesome poem, well done, a FAV, Constance
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/15/2025 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for your congrats. Much appreciated. And a special thank you for the "FAV". Happy you enjoyed the poem.
Date: 6/12/2025 5:52:00 PM
Dear Mickey, you captured the spirit of the contest, met the challenges put forth and channeled your exquisite artistry to create a deep, soulful, evocative poem with poetic finesse. Congratulations for your shining trophy win in Daniel’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/15/2025 12:17:00 PM
Susan, thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind reflection on this piece. It truly was a challenge, and I am still in shock over the win. Truly surprised, but very happy. W. H. Auden once said, "Poetry might be defined as the clear expression of mixed feelings." This poem might well fall within that description. Thank you, Susan.
Date: 6/11/2025 7:32:00 AM
Especially enjoyed the final 3 lines and your word mirrormourn! Congrats on your top win!
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/11/2025 8:34:00 AM
Kim, I'm so glad those lines spoke to you. Thank you for celebrating this poem with me.
Date: 6/11/2025 5:35:00 AM
A sincere and truthful look at the poet's fears and desires... written with a talented mind and empathetic heart. Congratulations on your deserved win! Xo
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/11/2025 8:33:00 AM
I truly appreciate your kind words and thoughtful reflection. Just knowing this poem connected with you makes the journey worthwhile. Thank you, Crystol.
Date: 6/10/2025 9:06:00 PM
Outstanding interpretation of subject matter & Beingness of an artist. Well done & THANKYOU for this gift, Mickey.
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/11/2025 8:30:00 AM
Your kind and supportive words mean a lot to me. Writing is often a solitary process (as I'm sure you know), and knowing this piece resonated with you is deeply fulfilling. Thank you.
Date: 6/10/2025 7:21:00 AM
Dear Mickey, as one of the co-judges, I congratulate you on 1st place! Warmest regards, Anne
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/10/2025 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, Anne, for the acknowledgement and for serving as one of the judges. It had to be a difficult task.
Date: 6/9/2025 7:32:00 PM
The axe does not ask, only answers. It falls, sharp with certainty—yes or no, seen or lost… And in the aching hush of mirrormourn…Congrats on 1st place!
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/10/2025 9:21:00 AM
Ah, that mirror...the instrument that divides. Thank you, Kim.
Date: 6/9/2025 12:58:00 PM
Mickey, congratulations on your first-place win. As one of Daniel's co-judges your entry was my first-place choice since the initial round. Your personal way of revealing your thoughts most closely followed the precedent Daniel set, and it was quite a feat. Remember this: the weight of silence can be more rewarding than false praise. Enjoy your trophy!
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Lin Lane
Date: 6/9/2025 2:17:00 PM
You’re very welcome, Mickey. ;-)
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/9/2025 1:28:00 PM
Lin, your sincerity and discernment mean so much to me. I take your words of wisdom to heart. I'm truly thankful, surprised, and humbled by this first-place honor. As General Patton put it, "The most difficult thing about being humble is not being able to brag about it." (lol) I deeply appreciate your insight and encouragement.
Date: 6/9/2025 12:29:00 PM
Good golly miss Molly I thought this might be a winner. Nice job Mick
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/9/2025 1:04:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. "Strange how people who suffer together have closer connections than those who are most content." --Bob Dylan "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." --Oscar Wilde on encouraging dreamers to keep writing despite hardship. I thought you would like these quotes, Tommy. Thx, my friend.
Date: 6/9/2025 12:18:00 PM
Hello Mickey, A big congratulations on this first place win which is more than well-deserved for it’s a soul laid bare and met with recognition. Your thoughts didn’t just speak, they cut, and in that beautiful moment, you gave others a place to bleed, to belong. Mirrormourn still haunts me. Congrats Again! Blessings, My friend, Daniel
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 6/9/2025 12:51:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel, for your generous words. Mirrormourn is indeed haunting--especially through watery eyes. To have this piece recognized, and more so, to know it resonated, is an honor beyond the prize itself. I’m grateful for PS, the space to share, and for the poets and readers who meet the work with dedication, and openness. I'm truly honored and humbled. Appreciate you, my friend. Blessings!
Date: 5/9/2025 9:17:00 AM
Whoa! So many good thoughts here. A reflection on the need and want for acceptance and accolades but also a deep dive into existential matters. Excellent entry for a difficult contest
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Mickey Grubb
Date: 5/9/2025 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Tom. I was up late for more than one night trying to get this one to come together. I've learned a lot by staring into a mirror! Your thoughts are much appreciated and encouraging.

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