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The Letters

The Letters Jane sits alone in her own world, adorned with crown of braided curls. She dreams of love like other girls, with memoirs precious as black pearls. Once she had a gallant lover, a soldier mate of her dear brother. Yet now a letter does uncover, the truth that he has found another. Along the shores of choral sand once she walked with him, hand in hand. In her heart he was the man to grace her with a wedding band. She muses over line by line and prays that she will heal in time. Until she reads where Brother signs, “Believe me Sis, his life is mine.” Quickly Jane wrote him a letter. “Believe ME when I say I’m better. Let not hate become a tether. There’s no need to let this fester.” Her letter is delayed for days by rain, wind and foggy haze while two went on with vengeful ways. At count of ten, both men are slayed. A letter came within a week. while Jane was coping with her grief. It stated words beyond belief "Forgive me Jane. I daily weep Read the words I told your brother. 'I love Jane only and no other. There was a lie to be uncovered.' Jane be my wife, my lifetime lover." Jane sits alone in nighttime cool. eyes closed in contemplative rue, regretting deeds that were so cruel and two loves shot dead in a duel. 8/11/17 Love for movie screens

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Date: 10/5/2017 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your nice win, Janis ...
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Date: 10/5/2017 7:53:00 AM
Oh, I enjoyed this story very much, Janis ... I want another chapter! Classic romance and intrigue - love it! Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - great stuff! :-)
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Date: 10/4/2017 8:11:00 PM
Back again Janis to congratulate you on your fine win!
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Date: 10/4/2017 1:33:00 PM
Janis, what an awesome story, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:21:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win!
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Date: 10/4/2017 7:05:00 AM
Such a tragic ending.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/2/2017 3:11:00 PM
Janis, CONGRATULATIONS!
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Date: 10/1/2017 10:46:00 PM
Congratulations Janis on your lovely win with your excellent poem.
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Date: 10/1/2017 9:39:00 PM
Really nice rhymes Janice congrats on a fine placement!
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Date: 8/13/2017 8:01:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Janis , very sad, well-crafted poem with, fantastic flow and rhyme. Congratulations on your win. ~*
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Date: 8/13/2017 7:35:00 PM
A sad story so well-written, Janis. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 8/13/2017 6:15:00 PM
Hi Janis, excellent, sad and with a surprise twist. A very compelled poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/12/2017 9:41:00 AM
Really enjoyable write, Janis ... The last stanza has been superb ...Btw, thank you for liking my 'mysterious night' ...
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Date: 8/11/2017 7:23:00 PM
Wow! Didn't see that coming. I like the take on the contest, best wishes...
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Date: 8/11/2017 7:03:00 PM
This is excellent Janis! Your last stanza is mind blowing! : )
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Date: 8/11/2017 1:13:00 PM
what a heartbreaking scenario Janis good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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