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The Last Act

I will soon forget, the laughter that I could give, when life felt so right. When the last curtain does fall, there will not be an encore. I stand on my mark. Dust motes float in the spot light. I curtsy left, right. There is no applause to hear, no one to see the last act. The seats are empty, the isles are not crowded, the doors are boarded. All that is left on this night, is the final toast farewell. Placement: 5th Contest: A Choice Of Form

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Date: 7/10/2011 9:58:00 AM
hi Paula, have just entered my first ever Pantoum for your comp. might withdraw it and start again? dont know if the format is right. David
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Date: 7/8/2011 4:53:00 PM
ahhh well we all do leave alone and in some sence live alone, hopefully we come to love ourselves? LIght & Love
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Date: 7/4/2011 6:06:00 PM
Such introspection, and somber feelings is this amazing entry. Terrific write, from somewhere deep. (ps....I'm sorry to be late in thanking you for the HM in the Yard SAle contest...was away for a few days, but pleased to see it was among such fine poems. Thanks Paula!
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Date: 7/3/2011 1:24:00 PM
Lovely deep write, Paula. Thanks - your Yard Sale was great fun : )
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Date: 7/3/2011 11:41:00 AM
your thoughts run deep, paula.. congrats on your superb win and thanks for appreciating my "yard sale" piece for you... enchanting! :) huggs
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Date: 7/3/2011 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations Paula, I am assuming it was Brian's, 14 line contestt, well done and thanks so much for my placement in your Yard Sale contest, I am very proud and honored, I loved writing it for you~~
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:56:00 PM
what contest was this for, Paula? I really like this. Was it one of Brian's? I wish his results were more noticeable for us to see!!
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Date: 7/2/2011 8:54:00 PM
great pen
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Date: 7/2/2011 7:50:00 PM
thankxx Paula for making my fireworks night shine with my 5th place for a special poem my friend.. a challenging contest .. congrats to u ..happy 4th luv...
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Date: 7/1/2011 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "A Choice Of Form" contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2011 10:05:00 AM
Emotionally touching, Paula. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:25:00 AM
Congrats Paula on your wonderful win.. with this dynamic piece my friend.. awesome words..happy holiday weekend..be safe..luv..
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Date: 6/30/2011 6:28:00 AM
wow, not sure wow is sufficient but this write did take my breath away, so i sit here blue faced and very impressed.
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Date: 6/30/2011 12:15:00 AM
wow!
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Date: 6/29/2011 11:09:00 PM
WOW! that's powerful stuff - Kyle
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