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E Form - Elegy Poetry Contest

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No screeching seagulls circled around The dilapidated forlorn lighthouse. Its searchlight had long been broken, A useless artifice for safety Of ships that plied the ocean near. The absence of seagulls indicated A severe storm was brewing fast. The sky all around was sepulchral and dark. All heavy with rain that began to fall Slowly at first, then gaining fierce force. A wanton wind rose in a wayward way, Wailing as if in the throes of death. Or perhaps these were more deadly echoes Of drowned sailors that died near the shore. One can only pray for the loved ones Gone forever ne’er to return. How cruel of man not to repair the lighthouse. The wails of drowned sailors lay heavily on them Their lack of interest in the common good was dreadful. Poor sailors died in vain but they were heroes. They suffered but will not be forgotten. The lighthouse became a poignant symbol Of their unwavering bravery and courage. Placed 1

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Date: 8/7/2024 1:37:00 PM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful elegy poem, I liked it a lot, well done, Constance
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Date: 8/1/2024 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Victor on your win in the contest with this wonderful Elegy poem… Beryl
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Date: 7/25/2024 3:04:00 PM
Congrats on this one. Nice seeing it again on a winner list
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Date: 7/23/2024 6:47:00 PM
"Poor sailors died in vain but they were heroes. They suffered but will not be forgotten. The lighthouse became a poignant symbol Of their unwavering bravery and courage." - A very powerful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/23/2024 1:17:00 PM
Stunning poem. A tribute to the sailors that unfortunately died often. This is a fishermen area, and there are lots of these tragic accidents. I also love lighthouses, we have one of the oldest. Anyway, well written. Hugs/María
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Date: 7/23/2024 9:52:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading about your "Lighthouse" again. I Love This Great Picture... Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Date: 7/23/2024 8:16:00 AM
A beautiful lighthouse poem Victor…l love lighthouses they are steadfast, strong, independent and a necessity and hope for the lost at sea! To allow a lighthouse to fall apart is a disgrace! Debx
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Date: 7/23/2024 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations, my friend!
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Date: 7/22/2024 4:45:00 PM
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Date: 7/21/2024 9:20:00 AM
How cruel, to let people die because a lighthouse so dilapidated and derelict was left to waste and crumble. These deaths, or a least some of them could have been saved, a little empathy, consideration, effort and law and order is required worldwide. Victor, your topics are always so well researched , Kudos for your very thoughtful writes. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/18/2024 4:01:00 PM
We hope they stay remembered. "A wanton wind rose in a wayward way." Beautiful metaphor Dear Victor. You have narrated This so well. Best wishes.
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Date: 7/17/2024 1:23:00 PM
Hi Victor, This is so rich in description, an absolutely wonderful write. Enjoyed immensely..
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Date: 7/16/2024 10:24:00 AM
Beautiful and in its own way, ethereal- I enjoyed reading
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Date: 7/15/2024 8:04:00 PM
I like lighthouses, though I believe ships now use GPS. Ylur poem is enchanting. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 7/15/2024 2:36:00 PM
An excellent take on this contest.. You have a deep poetic mind..
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Date: 7/15/2024 8:06:00 AM
Well said. Yes, the lighthouse is a beacon symbol in the dark of humanity. Follow the light. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 7/15/2024 7:20:00 AM
Humankind defines our nature, albeit, the human race--defines our placement. We know our place as history taught us, ergo, if we replace meaning with meaning, then it's our nature to forgo our place. The act invites, or sways, enticement. Greed parts our future, between haves and have nots. Titanic was a prime exempli gratia, wherein, the affluent survived, the destitute--died. Parlay the value of life according to their place (HRace), then, it's our nature (HKind)--save, or not. Aloha William
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Date: 7/15/2024 5:42:00 AM
A lightless structure won't help in a fierce storm, Very nicely penned
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Date: 7/15/2024 4:33:00 AM
Victor, your stark and clear imagery creates the perfect mood for the subject matter of your poem! You've constructed the so well that it is haunting to the reader and not easily forgotten!! Excellent!!
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Date: 7/15/2024 4:19:00 AM
Dear victor, i love this, the descriptive nature of this and also how seamlessly you weave alliterations always is so impressive! I felt the lines “ Poor sailors died in vain but they were heroes. They suffered but will not be forgotten. ” so heartfelt , and well delivered! Pleasure reading this moving elegy. Best wishes
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Date: 7/15/2024 3:25:00 AM
Victor, a great poem, there are many lighthouses where I live and sadly some are greatly in need of repair. -hugs
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Date: 7/15/2024 3:22:00 AM
Some things after they do their duty are abandoned, I agree it a memory of the sailors who fought the great waters of old, thank you for this delightful vision poem, V,
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Date: 7/15/2024 1:23:00 AM
I'm at impressed with your command of language. I especially liked the alliteration. Also... the imagery...sepulchral. What content! I hope you do well, if it's for a contest. Thank you for your visit to my page.
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:59:00 PM
It was such a unique idea to do lighthouse, Victor. They are so symbolic of the sailors and the sea. Great job
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:15:00 PM
This is so probable. We never repair what is broken. In our country, if there is a gutter in the road, no body cares to repair it, that accidents and deaths become a common occurrence. If people had taken care to repair that lighthouse, the lives of many sailors could have been saved. A touching poem. All the Best dear Victor.
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