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The Good Cry

A final ugly bellow followed by the front door's slam and then. . . the natural and sweet respite of silence. She remained where he'd left her and faced a pair of stony eyes staring back at her from the bathroom mirror. Stoically she stood, anger-fingers pressed to the inside of the basin's rim. A gall of indignation clutched at the inside of her throat. Her whispered curses waxed into a scream, "I hate you. You bastard. I Hate You!" Moments later. . . sad, kindred eyes met hers, asking what they always asked, "How do you support this all these years?" She gazed at the only one who truly knew and felt a rush of utter desolation. Concentrated rage was channeled to a river of self-pity. It spilled up and into the bile of her throat, erupting in her helpless gasps, transforming into hard and bitter sobs, and with this lament came gushing tears. Nothing else existed but the woman in the mirror and the grief. Some moments passed. She sniffled. Further weeping now would take some effort. She sighed the sigh of familiar resignation. Glancing at her consort, red-eyed, in the mirror, she turned the faucet on and dabbed a tear-streaked face. The telephone was ringing, so as she went to get the phone, she steeled herself in case the flood had not entirely ebbed. For the Catharsis Contest of Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/28/2013 8:01:00 PM
What a powerful and terribly sad poem. What an immagination you have.-Red
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Date: 9/19/2012 9:38:00 AM
super emotions here, Andrea, loving this page 9 of yours, i was away when the most of these were written!!!!
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Date: 7/12/2011 12:35:00 AM
congrats,... and thanks for your haikus in my contest... now go join my new one.. and don't give me no lectures..lol... kidding... I am clueless on contest right now. So i am gonna go crazy like the last time. Until inspiration hits me or a train.. take care,..p.d.
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Date: 6/27/2011 8:51:00 PM
Wow. Great Job..Congrats:)
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Date: 6/27/2011 8:43:00 AM
WOW I could feel those emotions coming out on this poem. Congrats on a win in the contest. Excellent write. love phyl
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Date: 6/27/2011 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Emote" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 1:49:00 AM
Extremely powerful - what a scene you have painted, Andrea. Sensational writing. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 6/25/2011 2:49:00 AM
Great story Andrea and cograts on your well deserved win!...Love, Gert
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Date: 6/24/2011 9:21:00 AM
congrats on your win with this exceptional piece cory
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Date: 6/23/2011 11:56:00 PM
I knew this was a WINNER! YES! 7 up and to the Favorites!
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Date: 6/23/2011 9:55:00 PM
Ooohoohoo! I think many of us have been there and done that. I know I can relate. Nice job here. God Bless, JBb49t
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Date: 6/22/2011 8:04:00 PM
Really happy to see this up there, sweetie! ^_^! Super congrats to you :) hugs to you :D
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Date: 6/22/2011 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, I thought this poem was amazing the first time I read it and it still is gripping, well done~~
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Date: 6/22/2011 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. Awesome. Enjoy the limelight, my friend. Hugs, Licia xxx
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:52:00 PM
Great job Andrea. My these have Congratualtions.Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:45:00 PM
You describe self pity so well in this poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:42:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your 5th place win in the Emote contest with this splendid entry my friend.. enjoy ..luv..
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Date: 6/22/2011 2:59:00 PM
Wonderful heart wrenching piece of writing here Andie and I only wish you did not understand the emotion so well I wish for you to understand joy...Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:51:00 PM
Wow, powerful write, Andrea
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Date: 6/22/2011 1:24:00 PM
A very well-written piece, Andrea. It could be an extract from a novel, or a scene from a film. Very descriptive and poetic. Self-pity or not, the occasional good cry is wonderfully cathartic. Good luck with this one. Love, Robert.
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Date: 6/22/2011 12:36:00 PM
An interesting title for this intense piece Andrea.. All the best for the contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 6/22/2011 4:44:00 AM
gripping till the end, andie... love hoe this flowed; fantastic.. winning's best to you! :) huggs
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:44:00 PM
Very good piece... a Poem thats stands on its own among a sea of others... so glad I got to read this more then once.. best of luck to you..luv Michael
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:33:00 PM
Good one...Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..We all get in that mode at some point in our lives ....Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/21/2011 4:10:00 PM
Wow, Andrea, this one is sublime, I am lost for words at the emotions, so well writtern, I sure hope Debbie recognizes this poem for its excellence~~
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