The Garden Party

Down the lane Wisteria danced sweet Violet. Happily, she sashayed, then made a pirouette. Since it was a special day, she was filled with glee, knowing at a party soon all her friends she’d see. Clustered blooms of blue and white twined around a gate where the hostess, Lavender, had begun her wait. Greeted warmly, Violet entered, and the first thing she saw to dazzle her was a color burst. . . Roses red as they can be, Bluebells bluest blue, Lilies white and posies pink, of the brightest hue! But her best friends were the ones gathered there to dine that sipped on nectar of the grape-their hue the most divine! Lovely Amethyst was there. So was Mauve, her chum. Then Magenta soon waltzed in with their close friend Plum. Languid Lavender, light-skinned, and Pastel, a gal also fair, sat chatting with Lilac, their best pal. Kin of lavender had come, more than just a few. . . Old Lavender, dressed in lace, covered her grey hue. Close relatives like Rose and even Pink were there Bright and Brilliant Lavender showed up as a pair! Violet, arriving late, mingled with each guest, looking for the ones with whom she’d relate to best. So it was she dined with two though not quite her hue: Indigo, a tad more blue; Periwinkle too! An oldie for the Garden Inspirations Poetry Contest Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley
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Peck Avatar
May 28, 2022 at 2:43 PM
I don't know how I missed commenting on this lovely poem. You have all the colors I love! And such a sweet poem to read. Congratulations!
Lillico  Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 12:14 PM
I can smell the party all the way from the North! What a unique premise, congrats!
Kauffman Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 10:43 AM
Absolutely delightful whimsy in personification Andrea! Now this is a garden party I want to attend. Love how you "entwined" all the flowers in the garden into a fun story! I think kids would love this! Congratulations on your win!
Daniel Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 3:56 AM
What a beautiful burst of imagination, colours and flowers, Andrea! Congratulations:)
Radice Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 3:51 AM
A very clever poem Andrea - loved the personification that added an extra depth to all the hues. Cheers - Gary
Alex Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 6:59 PM
Such a beautiful amalgamation of flowers. Wonderful party. Congratulations!
Legros Kelley Avatar
April 20, 2022 at 5:14 PM
Oh sweet friend, so it was you who wrote this wonderful poem! I love it :) Congratulations on your first place win in the contest! <3 ~BJ
Horsman Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 6:26 AM
what a wonderful colourfull floral experience reading this gem... just love it... your captcha had all my initials hhj with the number 9, thats your lucky number for the day....
Horne Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 1:39 PM
This is beautiful, Andrea. I love the clever way the colours are like people. Hope this unique one will take first place
Babcock Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 5:54 PM
You colored the world in purples and blues with this wonderful poem. love phyl
Ball Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 7:55 AM
I do love this. All the shades of blue and purple are there. Very, very nice. This should be in a children's book of colors. Wouldn't that be a great idea. God Bless, JB
Guzzi Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 1:51 PM
very very playfull and charming write instead of not mentioning the color you..tricky wench when for mentioning every sub shade of the color LOL..you are seldom this naughty! well it created a great write and a charming childrens book! Congrad's Light & Love
Puddifoot Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 9:04 AM
congrats on your win in the contest andrea, a very original take on the colour theme, I love how you incorporated all the different shades :-)
Gorelick Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 8:02 AM
You never disappoint..just great...congrats. BG
Mehta Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 7:27 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette,Andrea
Falotico Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Congrats Andrea!!!! On this superb write and win, love Michael
Brown Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations for your win Andrea in Nette's "Color My World" Contest. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 12:44 AM
congrats. on your win exquisite poem, David
George   Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 9:40 PM
Purple is without-a-doubt, my favorite color, Andrea. Wonderful writing. Many congrats on your super win. Lainie
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July 13, 2011 at 5:10 PM
shades of my life....congrats on the win!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 3:38 PM
Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win in color my world with this great write on color purple ..one of my favs.. in the city long ago my entire home was decorated in shades of purples.. so awesome as u luv..
Zzzzz Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 1:22 PM
Nicely done indeed. Very color co-ordinated write! Good luck in the contest. Love, Robert.
Neels Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 11:58 AM
Stunning piece Andrea, I love the color purple and this write of yours ;)lfde Wilma
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July 12, 2011 at 6:47 PM
I'm certain tonight, I will be overwhelmed with colours when I try to go to sleep ! *smiles* Awesome write dear poet ! I love the array ! have a bright night Andrea....much love, james
Austin Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 12:32 PM
Thy palette runeth over. How about the color, clover? Stunning work, Andrea
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