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The End of Time

Oh harbinger of death and shadowed sorrow We bow in your dominion that we may borrow Just one more minute of precious lasting life Even if it means to live in sacrificial strife Your wrath is like a raging running bull You make us dormant when our end is full You smite down souls within their prime The destroyer of worlds your name is time. June.20.2017 LATE JUNE STANDARD CONTEST any theme,any form maz of 25 lines Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 6/21/2017 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on an excellent job. So enjoyed it and the image so completed it. Perfect...Maria
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Date: 6/21/2017 8:07:00 AM
I was right! It did do well and is #1 :) CONGRATULATIONS! Well done.
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Date: 6/21/2017 3:14:00 AM
Mesmerizing! Wonderful number one.
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Date: 6/20/2017 10:48:00 PM
This is a fantabulous poem. Congrats for topping the chart.
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Date: 6/20/2017 7:58:00 PM
Your name is time! Powerful conclusive ending my friend! Congrats on this great succinct write WW
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Date: 6/20/2017 6:35:00 PM
Great rhymes WW, just excellent reading and flow!
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Date: 6/20/2017 11:58:00 AM
I've read most of your poetry and this one is exceptional enough to be a favorite. I hope you claim a high prize in the contest, WW.
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Date: 6/20/2017 11:22:00 AM
Excellent. Winged Warrior. I think this one is going to do well! :)
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Date: 6/20/2017 11:21:00 AM
Awesome!!! Simply excellent poetry, WW:) Good luck. I look to see this one at the top.
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Date: 6/20/2017 11:12:00 AM
Really nicely done. That last line closes this out very cool.
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