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The Dress

One last fitting... Looking into a full-length mirror Like seeing another person, who is this amazing creature? Her reflection, a beautiful woman from some enchanted tale Yesterday she was a girl child, today a full flower of womanhood Honey colored hair falling across her cheek Like a photograph, this moment to keep forever The hem of the dress sweeps the floor The fabric arranging itself in gleaming folds The sleeves flattering like little butterflies And the deep neckline reveals her best features Pretty plump shoulders of tan and gold With high heels, it will be just right She will wear her Mama's pearl drop earrings Her Grandmother's locket Of course she will need to do her hair Maybe sweep it up high, with little tendrils over her ears She can almost hear the music in her mind She glows...she smiles...she takes a deep breath... She turns, and there is her mother Handing her father a tissue And before this day .....she had never seen him cry.

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Date: 3/31/2009 10:16:00 PM
What a beautiful picture you have painted with words. It is a wonderful wedding gift.
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Date: 3/31/2009 9:46:00 PM
Dear Carrie, Bravo Magnificent A Great Dedication to a very Beautiful POET I E-mailed a POEM for her Daughter I agree with You on YOUR footnote "God Bless this Wedding and this Family" I can see YOUR Loving Heart in this POEM LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/30/2009 5:30:00 PM
Very familiar picture. A wedding dress seems to make every bride beautiful. Thanks for your comments on my "Wily Goat". Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/30/2009 2:01:00 PM
Smile~Yes, the union of love! Written so perfectly, tenderly and beautifully dear Carrie Richards!:) And I am quite certain that Sharons daughter and herself, shall be very pleased and thankful for this sincere and heart-felt write!:) And may their marriage live on happily until the ends of all time!:) Another one of Your beautiful writes dear!~"Love Always To You & Yours, John!"~"Have A Beautiful Day Carrie!:)
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Date: 3/30/2009 7:42:00 AM
Wonderful ! I could picture it all.... marvelous poetry Carrie ! Thank you for your comment.
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:58:00 AM
As Fred said in his comment...we will all be gate-crashing this wonderful celebration......at least in spirit!
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:37:00 AM
My daughter came by this weekend with the gown and shoes, as she will be getting ready here. Sigh. Don't know how to thank you for a poem I will treasure forever. Fred is right, my husband better bring his own box. ~lol~ Thank you so much for your kindness, prayers and good wishes. So blessed to have a friend like you. Big hugs, lots of love, Shar
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Date: 3/30/2009 6:36:00 AM
Needing that box of tissues right now. Just skimming the soup, as I don't have time to comment yet, and your title drew me in. Carrie, beautiful doesn't describe the poem. Thoughtful, caring and talented is certainly not enough to describe you. So deeply touched. cont'd...
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Date: 3/30/2009 3:56:00 AM
This is a beautiful write....love the magic that you captured.....a beautiful day.
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Date: 3/30/2009 12:06:00 AM
Yeah. And Sharon is on Cloud 9 in anticipation of the big event. Proud mama. But what I don't like about it is, she did not invite me to her girl's wedding. As if it will stop me from coming! Obviously she hasn't heard of the word 'gatecrashing' yet. Regards, Fred (P.S. And knowing Sharon, no, I don't think she is handing her husband any Kleenex at all...because a box of Kleenex is hardly enough for her own use! I know that woman from Jersey, she is a sentimental one! LOL)
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Date: 3/29/2009 8:22:00 PM
Carrie, this is so beautiful. The imagery is outstanding and the tenderness flows through this wonderul dedication to Sharon and her family! Yes, may God Bless and keep them always! (I can see her eyes welling as she reads this!) Excellent piece, Carrie! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/29/2009 6:33:00 PM
Oh how precious and I too hope wish them ever happiness.
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