The Dress

One last fitting...
Looking into a full-length mirror
Like seeing another person, who is this amazing creature?
Her reflection, a beautiful woman from some enchanted tale
Yesterday she was a girl child, today a full flower of womanhood
Honey colored hair falling across her cheek
Like a photograph, this moment to keep forever
The hem of the dress sweeps the floor
The fabric arranging itself in gleaming folds
The sleeves flattering like little butterflies
And the deep neckline reveals her best features
Pretty plump shoulders of tan and gold
With high heels, it will be just right
She will wear her Mama's pearl drop earrings
Her Grandmother's locket
Of course she will need to do her hair
Maybe sweep it up high, with little tendrils over her ears
She can almost hear the music in her mind
She glows...she smiles...she takes a deep breath...

She turns, and there is her mother
Handing her father a tissue

And before this day
.....she had never seen him cry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 10:16 PM
What a beautiful picture you have painted with words. It is a wonderful wedding gift.
Esquire Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 9:46 PM
Dear Carrie, Bravo Magnificent A Great Dedication to a very Beautiful POET I E-mailed a POEM for her Daughter I agree with You on YOUR footnote "God Bless this Wedding and this Family" I can see YOUR Loving Heart in this POEM LOVE ALWAYS...HG
Johnson Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 5:30 PM
Very familiar picture. A wedding dress seems to make every bride beautiful. Thanks for your comments on my "Wily Goat". Love, Joyce
Rhinem Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 2:01 PM
Smile~Yes, the union of love! Written so perfectly, tenderly and beautifully dear Carrie Richards!:) And I am quite certain that Sharons daughter and herself, shall be very pleased and thankful for this sincere and heart-felt write!:) And may their marriage live on happily until the ends of all time!:) Another one of Your beautiful writes dear!~"Love Always To You & Yours, John!"~"Have A Beautiful Day Carrie!:)
Williams Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 7:42 AM
Wonderful ! I could picture it all.... marvelous poetry Carrie ! Thank you for your comment.
Richards Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 6:58 AM
As Fred said in his comment...we will all be gate-crashing this wonderful celebration......at least in spirit!
Winter Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 6:37 AM
My daughter came by this weekend with the gown and shoes, as she will be getting ready here. Sigh. Don't know how to thank you for a poem I will treasure forever. Fred is right, my husband better bring his own box. ~lol~ Thank you so much for your kindness, prayers and good wishes. So blessed to have a friend like you. Big hugs, lots of love, Shar
Winter Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 6:36 AM
Needing that box of tissues right now. Just skimming the soup, as I don't have time to comment yet, and your title drew me in. Carrie, beautiful doesn't describe the poem. Thoughtful, caring and talented is certainly not enough to describe you. So deeply touched. cont'd...
Higgins Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 3:56 AM
This is a beautiful write....love the magic that you captured.....a beautiful day.
Derequito Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 12:06 AM
Yeah. And Sharon is on Cloud 9 in anticipation of the big event. Proud mama. But what I don't like about it is, she did not invite me to her girl's wedding. As if it will stop me from coming! Obviously she hasn't heard of the word 'gatecrashing' yet. Regards, Fred (P.S. And knowing Sharon, no, I don't think she is handing her husband any Kleenex at all...because a box of Kleenex is hardly enough for her own use! I know that woman from Jersey, she is a sentimental one! LOL)
Gass Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 8:22 PM
Carrie, this is so beautiful. The imagery is outstanding and the tenderness flows through this wonderul dedication to Sharon and her family! Yes, may God Bless and keep them always! (I can see her eyes welling as she reads this!) Excellent piece, Carrie! Love, Robin
Ginn Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 6:33 PM
Oh how precious and I too hope wish them ever happiness.
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