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The Dreariness of This Frigid Season

Goodbye Fall with all the auburn leaves of the reddest sunset, goodbye crackling path where I met the last songbirds, whose melody accompained me to winter's doors; and with deep sadness I kept on looking back. Welcome gloomy winter with short afternoons and long evenings; watching the advancing shadows and loudly hearing the furious sound of the squall rampaging the stately trees, and making them weep when the icy rain comes down with lightining. Sitting in a rattling, rocking chair, I peruse through pages of sunny places afar, forgetting the dreariness of this frigid season and be consoled by a warm fire; and still nostalgia abounds...thinking of the pleasant strolls of a past season, which thrilled me with its colors, and through delight I justified my reason. O winter, don't linger as you always have...shorten your stay, avoid foul play; and could I ever stand a pale sun, hardly giving off with its luminiscence, in this house hidden among the maples and the pines of a squalid valley? Old winter, don't mislead me with days without snow...that's utter pretense! Goodbye explorer fedora hat keeping my dreamer's head cool, sparing my skin another ugly wrinkle, allowing late beauty to rule; goodbye iced coffee sipped from my Big Apple plastic cup, which I bought along Fifth Avenue in a crowded, variety shop. Ummerciful winter, pity the desperate state I am in, reduce the wrath of your devastation, step inside and to tell me your amazing tales... hoping that I will write them down for everyone to read and enjoy for immortal ages; relentless winter, reduce the dreariness of this frigid season. Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 1/30/2010 7:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your success with this fine work. I enjoyed reading. Winter is a good time to cozy up with a good read....well done...Margaret
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Date: 1/17/2010 1:29:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win in Laura's contest ... great write ... well deserved win.. luv .. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/14/2010 12:54:00 PM
With the exception of the fedora hat and the rocking chair, I totally get and feel this entire. You so dearly spoke the truth with such description and beautiful wording. Congratulations on your first place finish!
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Date: 1/14/2010 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew, on your success in Laura McKenzie’s “Winter’s Adornment ” contest with your very well written and captivating poem. It's easy to see why you wone 1st place. Your poetic skills excel. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/13/2010 7:06:00 AM
Hey Andrew, a picturesque poem filled with great imagery! Don't know how I missed this! Congratulations on your First Place Win in the contest! Great write! Peace and love, Audrey P.S. Thank you so much for your kind comments.
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:07:00 PM
And unmerciful it has been in parts of our country. Vivid pictures here Andrew. Congratulations on your top win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/12/2010 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew, great picture rendering...next time I'm inclined to wish for the changes of seasons more than we get here in Southern California, I'll remember your poem and be grateful.
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Date: 1/11/2010 5:23:00 PM
Congrats on you win This is a great poetic read Well Done Andrew Love Cookie
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Date: 1/11/2010 10:22:00 AM
Wonderful poem Andrew, i bow to this piece, and deservedly chosen as the No 1 in Laura's fine contest >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 8:29:00 AM
You sure are on a roll, Andrew and it's no wonder! I really liked how you presented your write here and indeed you're successful in making us enjoy this read :) congrats on your first place win!
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Date: 1/11/2010 5:24:00 AM
Oh my goodness Andrew no wonder you received 1st place. This is absolutely beautiful. Congratulations my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2010 12:53:00 AM
Simply Beautiful! Congrats, Andrew! Loved the rhyme scheme...keep your gifted and talented mind flowing through 2010! EXCELLENT writing! Peace and hugs, John
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:22:00 PM
Well, I knew you should place high with this!! Congratualtions, Andrew!
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Date: 1/10/2010 9:29:00 PM
Congtatulations Andrew on your #1 win . You paint a vivid picture with this beautifully written portrayal of both the fleeting autumn and the winter. Thak you for sharing your talant. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/10/2010 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrew! Your poem was very deserving of the win. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 1/10/2010 5:36:00 PM
I have a rattling rocking chair also.. I love it.. and your poem. First place is an honour, enoy the glory..
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Date: 1/10/2010 4:41:00 PM
What a perfectly wonderful look at wonter, and the tole it takes on one's outlook! Well done!!! Congratulations on this well deserved 1st place honor! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/10/2010 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrew! great poem -Robert
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:34:00 PM
Andrew~ I had to love this story right from the beginning when I was choosing a winner Congratulations on your first place win! Much deserved! Love Laura :)
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Date: 12/29/2009 10:00:00 AM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Andrew. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/28/2009 12:15:00 AM
There were some magical and wintery lines in this poem, Andrew!
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