Tea

tea amber liquid, hot. aroma spreads, wispy steam rises, greets us in morn. joy to sip healthy drink August.17.2022 ~Placed First~ Say it in Nine Poetry Contest Sponsor-Joseph May

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/23/2022 2:33:00 PM

Congratulations on the win, Valsa! Great Ninette. Tea for me, please. :-) Bill

Ann Peck

Date: 8/20/2022 4:20:00 PM

Dear Valsa, love your Ninette! Altho I prefer coffee in the a.m., I could almost taste the tea you served. :)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/20/2022 4:56:00 AM

Great writing on tea. Kerala tea is very relishing. You had written on tea on another writing of yours too, I remember. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2022 12:50:00 PM

Love this one, and I love tea also. I have a lot of it and should start drinking it more than I've been doing lately!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/19/2022 9:41:00 AM

Valsa you have perfectly described my morning cup of tea - Earl Grey or Mango. So happy to know you are a tea drinker - a kindred spirit. You have so eloquently pointed out there is something spiritual about a cup of morning tea - invigorating and spirit nourishing! While I occasionally enjoy a cup of coffee, it is tea that feeds my soul and never leaves an aftertaste. Sending you blessings and a cup of refreshing tea my friend!

Joseph May

Date: 8/19/2022 6:52:00 AM

So many flavors to choose from, Congrats on your win Valsa, Lovely write

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2022 4:44:00 AM

A nice glass of iced tea in the south during hot summer days is so nice. I do drink a cup of hot tea occasionally but not very often. Your poem has made its good points reach out and touch me encouraging me to fix a cup. Maybe this fall when the temperatures drop along with some Danish Wedding Cookies. Thanks for the delightful comment you wrote at my page. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/19/2022 3:57:00 AM

Valsa, this is an extremely appealing poem, and it has many vivid details about tea, I really like it. Having said that, I am a coffee addict.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/17/2022 9:18:00 PM

Vividly descriptive, appealing piece, Valsa. Janice

Michael Tor

Date: 8/17/2022 9:05:00 PM

Love your Poetry and the tea Valsa.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/17/2022 6:25:00 PM

Tea looks so healthy! ~ Coffee Addict... who has recently switched to hot chocolate

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/17/2022 3:53:00 PM

Another tea drinker Well penned my friend it is said that on a hot day drinking tea actually cools one down. Thanks to the Chinese with their intuitive nature and their adventurous spirit for discovering this marvellous brew or beverage. Good luck in the contest love and hugs Jennifer