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Taking A Look Inside

Should a man dare to look within? Search secret places of hidden sin? The lack of which could be exhilarating, But those long loss, debilitating. Even those revealed can be a gift, Confession, forgiveness, they could give a lift. Or an insight into his authenticity, Could open his eyes that he might see. Through the illusion, that’s led him astray, Guiding him back to his intended way. Leading to personal responsibility, Helping him become all he can be. All men have sinned, falling short of perfection, Often frustrated by their illusionary perception.

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/2/2023 7:50:00 PM

100% and Amen, Bill. Sage advice, poetically couched. Great write, gw

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 9:52:00 PM

Thanks for the positive feedback, my friend. It's great to be writing and posting again. BB

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/2/2023 7:07:00 PM

Impressive advice, my friend. The ones who are revealed have the potential to be gifted; confessing wrongdoing or receiving atonement can be empowering. Or a glimpse into his authenticity—very well put!

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 9:53:00 PM

Thanks again for all you encouraging words, my friend. BB

Valsa George

Date: 12/1/2023 8:14:00 PM

An introspection into self will give us an awareness of our sins and failings. With contrition, our sins will be forgiven. When we get ready for Christmas, through a good confession, we can clean up our conscience and get prepared to receive infant Jesus in our heart. As always, your sonnets are so beautiful and I love them.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:43:00 PM

Thank you, my dear friend, Valsa. Your words are a joy to my heart. Yes, this is the month we celebrate the birth of Jesus here in the U.S.A. It gives me a whole month to reflect on this year and what it has meant to my life having God with me each day. Smiles and Blessings Bill

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/1/2023 6:15:00 PM

This poem is very deep. I read a lot of soul searching therein.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:40:00 PM

I tend to think a lot, I know the wisdom comes from within. Thanks for the mindful comments, Hilda, my friend. Have a pleasant weekend. Bill

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 12/1/2023 1:44:00 PM

Such a great message you have conveyed through your wise words Bill!

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:38:00 PM

Thank you for a first visit and comments on my poetry, Smita. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my poems. I'll visit your poetry soon to read and comment. Have a pleasant weekend. Bill

Lin Lane

Date: 12/1/2023 12:14:00 PM

A man must search within for there are no sins hidden from our Father. Only one human was born without sin, and that was so we could be saved from our fault of sinning.. Forgivable if sorrowfully admitted. Your thoughts are faith bound, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:37:00 PM

Thank you for the thoughtful comments, Lin. I'd never make it to heaven without Jesus. Have a blessed weekend, my friend. Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/1/2023 12:04:00 PM

Potent advice, my friend. Even those revealed can be a gift, Confession, forgiveness, they could give a lift. Or an insight into his authenticity--so well said!

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:35:00 PM

I agree, Vijay, sometimes we're not as smart as we think we are. They're a lot of lessons we miss along the way. I appreciate your visits and comments, my friend. Have a pleasant weekend. Bill

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/1/2023 10:12:00 AM

Such an uplifting and spiritual message my friend.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:33:00 PM

Thanks, Jerry, it's always good to see you've visited my poetry. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill

Mark Hughes

Date: 12/1/2023 9:54:00 AM

So very well done Bill, insightful!!

Jay Narain

Date: 12/1/2023 9:53:00 AM

Nice spiritual poem.

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:31:00 PM

Thanks, Jay. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/1/2023 9:24:00 AM

Bill, your poem is a profound exploration of self-discovery and personal growth. Your woven introspection of the human condition is commendable, offering readers a deep dive into authenticity and responsibility. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:31:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and for following my poetry, Daniel. I've started following yours also. I'll be visiting soon to catch up a bit on your recent poetry. Have a pleasant weekend, Bill

Tom Woody

Date: 12/1/2023 8:59:00 AM

Love those last two lines of your sonnet Bill. If only more would realize that a savior has made himself available. Not that the ransom is a license to sin. Jude shot that notion down in his letter

Bill Baker
Date: 12/2/2023 3:27:00 PM

Most people never get to the book of Jude, but your certainly right. Thanks for the visits and comments, Tom. Sara and I both appreciate your friendship and poetry. Have a pleasant weekend! Bill