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Swimming In the Lake of Love

Warm feet Hot body Pink peace Nobody Gets me Like you Dive deep Love true

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James Peranteau

Date: 10/15/2023 11:39:00 AM

....tishhhhhh ')

Karen Jones
Date: 10/15/2023 12:00:00 PM

Hmmm unsure what tish means but thanks for reading my poem.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/13/2023 6:03:00 AM

You use “pink” much so that is quite meaningful to you…

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2023 8:37:00 AM

I wondered if that might be part of it. Sorry for your loss. 24 year old is just a short time…tears. My cousin and mom died from ovarian.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/13/2023 8:18:00 AM

Yes. I love pink and purple. It's also breast cancer month and had 3 family members battle it. It killed the 24 year old. Sadly

Valsa George

Date: 10/13/2023 1:18:00 AM

Very passionate and deeply romantic. Enjoyed your piem Karen.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/13/2023 3:20:00 AM

Valsa so glad you did. Thanks!

Deb M

Date: 10/12/2023 10:54:00 AM

How beautiful and inviting Karen! Lovely….Debx

Karen Jones
Date: 10/12/2023 11:36:00 AM

Thanks Deb hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/11/2023 3:18:00 PM

Another wonderful poem. It's difficult to find a perfect lake.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/11/2023 3:49:00 PM

In life yes but in love no. The lake is a metaphor. Thanks for liking the poem.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/11/2023 12:13:00 PM

I love Free Verse and write a great deal of my poetry in Free Verse, your magic pen ever creative. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/11/2023 12:17:00 PM

I appreciate you visiting and I love free verse too. Hugs and blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/11/2023 11:34:00 AM

- Pink peace sounds wonderful, Karen :) - hugs

Karen Jones
Date: 10/11/2023 12:16:00 PM

Hugs thanks for reading Anne-Lise

Eve Roper

Date: 10/11/2023 8:23:00 AM

Enjoyed reading. Eve

Karen Jones
Date: 10/11/2023 8:46:00 AM

Glad you liked it Eve.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 10/11/2023 5:09:00 AM

A nice poem. Well done.

Karen Jones
Date: 10/11/2023 6:32:00 AM

Thanks Jeanette

Alkas Poetry

Date: 10/11/2023 1:21:00 AM

enchanting LOVELY poem, Sweet words joined With ART, TRUE short DREAM tem, TRUE love ! salute alkas

Karen Jones
Date: 10/11/2023 1:26:00 AM

Alkas thanks for your kind comment.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/10/2023 9:39:00 PM

Free Verse, Karen. You just let your heart open and let the words flow through. Thanks for sharing your thoughts on, "Swimming in the lake of love". Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill

Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 10:30:00 PM

OK thanks Bill. I didn't know which form fit. :0)

Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 10:30:00 PM

OK thanks Bill. I didn't know which form fit. :0)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/10/2023 7:56:00 PM

Almost a footle. Almost... I find it cool that you've got such a (relatively) long title and a poem of such short BURSTS of MEANING. Cheers, Gershon

Karen Jones
Date: 10/10/2023 10:29:00 PM

So since I don't understand HOW to write a footle I will now research out of curiosity. Gershon thanks:0)