Sweet Summer

To thrushes’ serenade at blush of dawn
and with the blooming of magnolia trees,
sweet Summer wills the sun to smile upon
the meadow flowers scenting morning’s breeze.
Sometimes she’s mellow; other times she’s bold.
She’ll sizzle, yet she’ll soothe with wind’s embrace.
She’s strawberries, fireflies and marigold.
In azure skies, she plants a rainbows’ grace.
Then drawn-out days at last come to an end.
Persimmon sunsets disappear from sight
when shadows creep and into darkness blend,
but her bright stars can light the blackest night.
I still recall how all my cares were flung
when she came. Oh, to be once more so young!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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VanHooser Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 3:25 PM
Oh, the summers of our youth...I loved them. There was always work the farm, but even that was made better with summer breezes, blue skies, and the warmth of the summer sun. This poem brought back some wonderful memories that I should visit more often as they, like this poem, always make me smile. Thank you for sharing Andrea, excellent work! Ron
Kerr Avatar
July 21, 2025 at 1:08 AM
Hi Andrea, This overwhelming picturesque poem showcases your literary skills in vivid colour. As vivid as the imagery a profound work Howard
Peck Avatar
July 20, 2025 at 12:29 PM
You describe Summer so beautifully, Andrea. And, I love your last two lines! Isn't that just the truth!
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 7:25 PM
A wistful season, she seems sometime...beautiful work
Radice Avatar
July 19, 2025 at 1:31 AM
The long hot blue sky summers of childhood are beautifully captured in your nostalgic write here Andrea. Life was simpler back then wasn't it? Lovely read. Cheers - Gary
Herath Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 11:42 PM
Your sonnet beautifully captures the essence of summer with vivid imagery and a tender emotional undercurrent. The poet’s use of nature—thrushes, magnolias, strawberries, and sunsets—evokes a sensory richness that’s both nostalgic and enchanting. Its graceful rhythm and poignant final couplet leave a lasting impression of wistful longing for the carefree days of youth.
Sharma Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 8:44 AM
What a beauty!! Summer is!!!
Horne Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 7:21 AM
lovely nostalgic write, my friend
Velasco Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 4:38 AM
A lovely sonnet that captures summer’s warmth, playfulness, and wistful farewell with vivid imagery and gentle rhythm. The final couplet is especially moving—longing and nostalgia wrapped in poetic grace. Beautifully done!
DiMino Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 10:34 PM
"She’s strawberries, fireflies and marigold." -- love those images. "I still recall how all my cares were flung when she came. Oh, to be once more so young!" -- Indeed, I miss young...when all were exciting and beckoning. Miss the mystery most of all...not knowing so much.
George Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 10:30 PM
A lovely sonnet . "She’ll sizzle, yet she’ll soothe with wind’s embrace". Love the personification of summer. All the Best.
Bayles Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 8:10 PM
Such beautiful imagery, such sweet sentiment. I love the ending. So emotional.
May Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 7:08 PM
"Sweet summer wills the sun to smile upon the meadow flowers", Wonderful write Andrea
Rolland Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 5:30 PM
great sonnet, final verse is "outstanding" enjoyed have a nice week end poet
Baker Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 5:14 PM
I always enjoy a good Sonnet, Andrea. Thanks for sharing yours with us today. Hugs, Bill
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