Surrender

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“Surrender is like fish finding the current and going with it” Mark Nepo Love's a gamble; there are no rules, and yet, it's all-or-nothing stakes. But the odds do not favor fools chipping at my heart till it breaks. You smile, and my heart skips a beat as my pulse swiftly starts to race. For, staying calm, is no small feat when I see that smile light your face. Trust imbues love with wings of hope to pursue a heart pure and true. And I've severed my safety rope, surrendering myself to you. But in surrender, I found bliss as two halves made each other whole. For; when passion fuels each kiss, love morphs into one heart and soul. (Quatrain) 04/09/2023 Writing Challenge - 'S' Words Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Ann Peck

Date: 4/13/2023 9:13:00 AM

Your poem is beautiful, Emile. I especially love your last four lines. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/13/2023 1:19:00 PM

Thanks, Ann, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/12/2023 2:54:00 PM

This is really terrific Emile. Rhyming and flow are spot on. Congratulations on your win! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/13/2023 8:56:00 AM

Thanks, Linda, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 4/12/2023 10:02:00 AM

Emile, thank you so much for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge, congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/12/2023 11:13:00 AM

Thanks, Constance, your contests are always a welcomed challenge, my friend, Emile

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/10/2023 4:42:00 PM

Hello Emile, oh Emile, this is so romantic. Trust imbus with love wings of hope there is always hope to find the right person to spend the rest of their lives together. enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/11/2023 10:25:00 AM

Thank you Emile, I did. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2023 8:35:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene, as always, I appreciate your comments, have a good night my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2023 11:15:00 AM

- ... "when passion fuels each kiss, love morphs into one heart and soul" ... even for fools, Emile :) - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/9/2023 3:08:00 PM

Thanks, Sunshine, as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.