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* Day Begins With sunrise, Casting shadows As it climbs upwards Into the clear blue sky, Everywhere now bathed in Bright glorious golden sunshine, Then at noon it reaches the zenith And then begins the descent to sunset.
Written on 15th June 2022

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Date: 9/30/2022 6:40:00 AM
Love watching the sunrise with you. Love this form for the shape it assumes. SuZ
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Date: 9/30/2022 7:26:00 AM
Thank you very much Suz, never get tired of watching both, natures wonders. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 8/12/2022 5:16:00 AM
Good Morning Tom. Be very proud of this entry. The execution is marvelous and the subject is beautiful with imagery. Have a wonderful day. Blessings always.
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Date: 8/12/2022 5:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Lisa I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 7/29/2022 2:17:00 PM
What a "Beautiful" write/pictures. The two best times of the day, Sunrise/Sunset. Have a great day/weekend writing away................
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Date: 7/30/2022 2:43:00 AM
Thank you Paula, they are indeed. Have witnessed both many times in different locations around the world. Have a great weekend. Tom
Date: 7/3/2022 2:50:00 PM
The imagery and your descriptive words Tom creates in ones mind the scenes of a perfect Sunrise to Sunset. Your talent as a writer is very impressive my friend...
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Date: 7/3/2022 9:42:00 PM
Thank you very much Michael, seen many beautiful sunrises and sunsets and never get tired of seeing them. Tom
Date: 7/3/2022 12:49:00 PM
What a picturesque, aesthetic etheree with the oxymoron so neatly sketched from sunrise to sunset!... Silpika
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Date: 7/3/2022 9:41:00 PM
Thank you very much Silpika, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 6/21/2022 7:23:00 AM
How beautiful and with lovely pictures to enhance!
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Date: 6/21/2022 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Kim, sunsets and sunrises never fail to inspire me. Tom
Date: 6/19/2022 1:34:00 PM
Perfect pics and poetic description, of a sunset, best of luck in the contest, although i think it is a definite winner. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/19/2022 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer, watching a sunset inspired me for this one. It wasn't for a contest though. Tom
Date: 6/18/2022 5:14:00 PM
Tom, a stunning poem and form. I love it. Panagiota xxx
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Date: 6/19/2022 12:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Pangie, im happy that you liked it. Love this form. Tom
Date: 6/18/2022 3:51:00 PM
the etheree shape is ideal for this nice poem of yours, Tom. Well done!!
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Date: 6/19/2022 12:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, im glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 6/17/2022 6:31:00 AM
What goes up, must come down. The shape was fabulous, a well written Etheree, Tom. p.s. I've had a couple of problems with someone sending comments as me. The person has made a very negative comment on one of my poems also. Thanks for reporting it. If it was negative, it wasn't me. Have a good day my friend, Bill
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Date: 6/17/2022 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Bill, you have nothing to fear, everyone on here knows what a decent man you are. Creeps who get cheap kicks doing that need to get a life. Tom
Date: 6/16/2022 3:27:00 PM
The great pyramid of Cunningham! A beautiful sunny day passed along!
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Date: 6/16/2022 10:42:00 PM
Thank you Mark, after a really sunny week rain is forecast for the weekend, we always pay. Tom
Date: 6/16/2022 12:32:00 PM
Tom, your etheree is beautifully shaped and your words depict so well the daily arc of the emperor of the sky. Well done, sir, enjoy your day ~ John
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Date: 6/16/2022 1:41:00 PM
Thank you very much John, always a great inspiration for me, sunrise and sunset, the wonders.of creation.. Hope you too are having a great day. Tom
Date: 6/16/2022 11:31:00 AM
From east to west our sun emerges and departs, you've captured it so eloquently... within a pyramid, displayed just on time to greet the summer solstice. Masterful Tom!
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Date: 6/16/2022 1:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Anaya, Im happy that you enjoyed it. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 6/16/2022 10:59:00 AM
Is your pyramid responsible for the heatwave? If so, please redirect it to Russia! Well done! Aloha!
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Date: 6/16/2022 11:02:00 AM
Lol Rico, if it was down to me I'd atrach a nuclear warhead. Tom
Date: 6/16/2022 6:05:00 AM
I enjoyed the pictures plus the Etheree to go along side of the poem. Days can be so beautiful in their changes as I am sure our lives are beautiful to God in our changes. Thanks for the visit to my page and the kind review of my work. Sara
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Date: 6/16/2022 8:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara, im pleased that that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 6/16/2022 1:59:00 AM
Dear Tom, in both form and message, your Etheree shines whether it's sunrise or sunset. Beautifully shaped and balanced. I know that's not an easy task. Well done!
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Date: 6/16/2022 3:33:00 AM
Thank you very much Jenna, Seen some amazing ones over the years and never tire of observing them. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 6/16/2022 1:26:00 AM
A " Pyramid " that surpasses in beauty that of Cheops, my dearest friend, Tom. Be blessed!
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Date: 6/16/2022 1:52:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios, im happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 6/15/2022 9:30:00 PM
A perfect poem, for a perfect day. Tom.
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Date: 6/16/2022 12:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry, we're having a bit of a heatwave at the moment, no doubt we'll pay for it. Tom
Date: 6/15/2022 5:38:00 PM
A very lovely poem Sir Tom beautifully written! Sunrise and sunset is nature’s perfect artwork! Debx
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Date: 6/15/2022 6:34:00 PM
Thank you very much Deb, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. I never tire of seeing both. Tom
Date: 6/15/2022 3:33:00 PM
Beautiful poem Tom--traversing from sunrise to sunset--sprinkling glory along the way.
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Date: 6/15/2022 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Vijay, they both always inspire me,have seen some spectacular ones over the years. Tom
Date: 6/15/2022 3:32:00 PM
Beautiful Etheree Tom. A Fave for me too :)
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Date: 6/15/2022 3:34:00 PM
Thank you very much Heidi, I'm happy that you liked it,thanks too for faving it. Tom
Date: 6/15/2022 3:19:00 PM
An honest depiction of the earth in motion Tom, using the sun as our focal point, the pyramid effect is quite stark, and enhances the reader’s experience, A fine piece of sculpture indeed, cheers David
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Date: 6/15/2022 3:22:00 PM
Thank you very much David, I've seen some amazing sunrises and sunsets around the world, they never fail to inspire me. Tom
Date: 6/15/2022 3:13:00 PM
Hello tom, this is a beautiful poem. I am making it my fav. Enjoy your evening my friend
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/15/2022 4:16:00 PM
Hello Tom, a beautiful poem you crea\ted needed to be my fav. i am well thank you. I hope you are to. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 6/15/2022 3:20:00 PM
Thank you very much Darlene, I'm glad you liked it, thanks too for the fave. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

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