Suncatcher

In gentle breeze, a prism swings,
until each side has felt the sway
It hangs there by a thread of string
while waiting for the sun to play.

Sun passes by, so brief a glance
refracting light from morning skies
And soon my eyes must do a dance, 
entranced by all the butterflies !

Thrown against the wall as dice
Into a million moths that clone
from splintered sunlight, color- spliced,
as clear as ice, precisely honed. 

And as it twirls, more colors soar
With constellations telescoped
They rise up deep from prism's core
as if to make kaleidoscopes.

Walls gather up the rainbow's hue
Stain-glassed winglets for my view
Although I try to catch a few
They fly away, ...while sun does too.


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For Contest Sponsored By Julia Ward
"A Kaleidoscope of Butterflies"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/29/2014 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, written with excellence ....Seren
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Date: 7/29/2014 1:58:00 PM
Carrie, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:00:00 PM
Brilliant write, fine win my friend!! Congrats !!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 10:33:00 AM
What a lovely sun-catching write, Carrie! No wonder that it is a winner once again! Congratulations! // paul
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Date: 7/28/2014 10:08:00 AM
Love it! Congrats.
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:14:00 AM
Fabulous write Carrie! Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win, Carrie. Kika
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Date: 7/28/2014 6:38:00 AM
Simply beautiful, dear Carrie.. Congrats on a great win, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/28/2014 12:58:00 AM
Very graceful write, Carrie. congrats
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Date: 7/27/2014 11:26:00 PM
This is glorious. A wonderful win. Love, joyce
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Date: 7/27/2014 9:07:00 PM
What can I say Carrie? I've used up all of my words in my comments on your exquisite and compelling poetry...
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Date: 7/27/2014 7:42:00 PM
I was mesmerized with wonder as I read these beautiful words, Carrie! Lovely rhyming in this, as well.... Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 3/9/2014 12:27:00 PM
Congrats Carrie...love the subject you chose. BG
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Date: 3/9/2014 11:21:00 AM
Lots of awesome imagery you gave me, Carrie. Thanks so much for this lovely entry and congrats on your win in my contest. (I saw some near rhyming and gather rhymed with colors , those were reasons this one did not score higher) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/9/2014 10:04:00 AM
You are so talented, exquisite piece. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win. Enjoyed the rhyme perfect, carrie
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:57:00 AM
you can take any subject and make it glow, carrie!.. ..sweet 'grads on your award!.. huggs
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:24:00 AM
A great work you did here , congrats Carrie.
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Date: 3/2/2014 11:17:00 PM
Very well done Carrie.
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Date: 2/26/2014 7:47:00 PM
You caught the rainbow colors quite well in this splendid write dear poet ! I loved this write Carrie, thank you for brightening what has been a somber week for me and mine my friend. Have a wonderful rest of your week.....much love, james
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Date: 2/26/2014 4:46:00 PM
Carrie, Suncatcher, caught my admiration! 7 You also have a unique....inspiration catcher! My best, chuck
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Date: 2/26/2014 10:57:00 AM
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY DELIGHTFUL! There go my chances! ;) Andrea is not too keen on mush....and all my poetry is mush...THIS...THIS is superb, Carrie....I have a crystal sun-catcher...the rainbow of colors of my wall mesmerizes me. You capture this SO beautifully...and the flow....not contrived you got swap...down PAT! HUGS :)
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Date: 2/26/2014 8:48:00 AM
Carrie, this really is dazzling.
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Date: 2/25/2014 4:18:00 PM
A very colorful write. Andrea should like this one.
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