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Summer Nights

The summer night skies light up with fire,
                         
showing off fireworks and lightning.
                                   
We want to see more~our desire.
                                     
This is fun to watch not frightening.
  
Date Written: 7/4/2022
4 Place
The Sky in July Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 7/19/2022 2:51:00 AM
Nicely done, a winning piece...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:45:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Date: 7/18/2022 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, you crafted a beautiful poem and your metaphors are just amazing. Blessings
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:44:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, kind words and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Date: 7/18/2022 1:39:00 AM
Wow! Very beautiful poem and imagery my dear friend Paula. Congratulations on your win and this amazing write! Thanks for sharing! God bless. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:43:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write. Thanks for your WOW!!! That made my day special. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Date: 7/17/2022 7:01:00 PM
Congratulations Paula on your win !Have a great Sunday!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2022 2:42:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Date: 7/17/2022 11:29:00 AM
you need to tell my dog it's not frightening. haha. Thanks for writing in my contest, Paula and congrats.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 2:17:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your Sky in July Contest. Glad you like my "Summer Nights" write. Can you read this to your doggie. Dear Doggie, The fireworks and lightning cannot hurt you. Mommy will always keep you safe. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Date: 7/17/2022 9:58:00 AM
Indeed, the beauty of summer nights are captured in your wonderful poem, Paula. Your vibrant imagery is a delight! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my sweet friend.. ~Susan
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 10:50:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and for your best wishes. Glad you like this "Summer Nights" write. Summer and their beautiful nights are wonderful. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Date: 7/15/2022 3:59:00 AM
It might be fun to see but it is frightening to Veterans with PTSD and it is terrifying to cats and dogs.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 10:48:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. I know animals do not like the fireworks/lightning. I had to hold my pets. I did not know about frightening to Veterans with PTSD. Thanks for teaching me something new. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Date: 7/12/2022 8:44:00 PM
A soft, dreamy poem, Paula. The skies are alight in summer. Best of luck in contest!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2022 11:51:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and for your best of luck. Glad you like this soft/dreamy write. Summer nights are wonderful. I love them. Tonight/Wed night is a special night in the sky. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Date: 7/5/2022 7:12:00 AM
Paula, your poem is lovely for the contest, best of luck (can you check your soupmail) blessings ~Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2022 11:21:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and for your best of luck. Glad you like this fun write. Summer nights/celebrations can be wonderful. I did soup mail you. "Thanks" Have a blessed day..............
Date: 7/4/2022 6:34:00 PM
I love summer nights and the fireworks this time of year, lovely quatrain Paula, thank you for sharing.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2022 11:14:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed my fireworks/celebration write. It was a fun one. Have a blessed day.......................
Date: 7/4/2022 4:55:00 PM
Enjoyed the celebration you convey for 4th of July, Paula. Best to you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2022 11:12:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed the celebration. Summer nights and celebrations go together. Have a blessed day.......................
Date: 7/4/2022 2:46:00 PM
A nicely penned poem, Paula. With great imagery and symbolism. Nothing can beat summer nights. Good luck in the contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/5/2022 11:09:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and for your good luck. Summer nights can be wonderful. Hope all of yours will be wonderful. Have a blessed day..........

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