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Springtime

. Springtime awaits her chance. a pause, hesitant glance. Birds listen for message of wind, Earth slows rotation in expectation, moments quiver, emotions rise, awaiting spring's entrance. Spring, at last, smiles. Springtime! January 15, 2023 for "Pen a Rictameter, Hope of Spring's Return" by M. L Kiser

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Date: 1/28/2023 3:22:00 PM
back with my congrats,Ann
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Date: 1/28/2023 1:25:00 PM
Enjoyed this great spring poem, Ann. Congratulations on your contest-deserved win.
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Date: 1/28/2023 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your "Springtime" write. Yes, Spring will smile. Have a blessed day/weekend................
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Date: 1/28/2023 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 1/18/2023 8:12:00 PM
Yes, this feels like the beginning of spring, tentative and fragile, I like how the expectation rises and then the smile of spring, very eloquent!
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/22/2023 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Michelle. Please hurry, Spring!
Date: 1/18/2023 2:25:00 PM
Anne, Like the hope your words lets me feel. Longing for fields of green, birds a-chirping, and feeling warmth! Makes for happiness and joy! Thx, suzanne
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Date: 1/17/2023 5:37:00 AM
Wonderful write Ann, best wishes
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/21/2023 10:53:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph! Hurry Spring!
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/17/2023 9:41:00 AM
Joseph, Thank you so much for your kind comments!
Date: 1/16/2023 7:44:00 PM
Oh this is really lovely Ann! Good luck in the contest my friend :-)
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Date: 1/16/2023 2:56:00 PM
A real gem. This is a cool contest i think!
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/16/2023 3:39:00 PM
Thanks! I do, too. And I'm so ready for Spring!

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