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Spring Love

Nutty Nick walked beyond the bend As rows of dandelions didn’t end~ The first sign of spring Went past children on swing And trees ready, their lost grace to mend In verdant air, he continued his stroll Soon he knew losing his heart and soul To a lovely lass, Cutting fodder grass Afraid, didn’t dare to kiss or cajole
Feb.18.2022 Spring in Air Poetry Contest Sponsor- Mohan Chutani

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Date: 3/6/2022 4:34:00 PM
He had a touch of the Spring fever, Nicely penned Valsa
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Date: 2/19/2022 1:46:00 PM
Lovely Lovelorn lyrics. Good luck, Rob
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Date: 2/19/2022 7:22:00 AM
He was nutty indeed! I love the stroll and the the action!
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Date: 2/19/2022 6:01:00 AM
Vasal, your poem was enjoyable and helped me grin. Wishing you the best of success in the contest.
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Date: 2/18/2022 4:13:00 PM
Very clever Limerick of requited love. Good luck in the contest. :)Paulette
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Date: 2/18/2022 1:54:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem Vasal, Made me smile. Good luck in the contest. Hugs ~ Debra
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Date: 2/18/2022 10:32:00 AM
As a young lad, I hung out in a bar frequented by prostitutes, and learned their customers would enter, stare longingly at the most beautiful, but always choose the one least likely to refuse them. That never made any sense at all to me since they are all there to earn a living and all went for the same price! But you caught life as we know it! Aloha!
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Date: 2/18/2022 9:03:00 AM
Fun read, Valsa, great contest entry!
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Date: 2/18/2022 8:35:00 AM
Haha.. you made me smile.. you did these so well..
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Date: 2/18/2022 7:53:00 AM
You are at ease with this form Valsa. He made the right decision in the end. All the best.
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