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Sky Lark

Sky beckons me. I want to be a lark and fly into the periwinkle blue of it - then soar high where cotton ball clouds are wafting. Maybe I could try to ride a cloud as if it were a magic carpet! When sun begins to die, I’ll smoothly slide with it behind the mountains! Nov. 4, 2021 for Charles Messina's Something Beautiful 5 Line Rhyme Poetry Contest Now for 'A STRAND (1048)' Poetry Contest

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Ann Peck

Date: 11/19/2021 3:03:00 PM

You painted a beautiful picture, especially where cotton ball clouds are wafting. So lovely. Congratulations on your win!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 11/11/2021 4:12:00 PM

Congrats Andrea :)

Charles Messina

Date: 11/11/2021 12:47:00 PM

This is so beautiful, Andrea. I love the line "maybe I could try to ride a cloud as if it were a magic carpet" Great imagination. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie

Valsa George

Date: 11/10/2021 9:45:00 PM

A beautiful whim, beautifully expressed, young friend ! At your age, people wish to ride on the wings of imagination to magic lands.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/9/2021 9:19:00 AM

Awesome write Andrea, very creative and a perfect entry for this contest, I love your last line! Hugs, Blessings, Jennifer.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/7/2021 10:58:00 AM

Wouldn't it be wonderful to be able to fly and Soar like a bird. It would be amazing. Tom

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 11/6/2021 7:57:00 AM

Hi Andrea, the magic of "Sky Lark" is the imagery of a "magic carpet".... love the whimsy. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Paulette

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/6/2021 7:16:00 AM

Love the Magic CARPET IMAGE PANAGIOTA

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/6/2021 2:29:00 AM

I always dreamed of being amidst the clouds and flying like a bird which is one of the reasons I chose the job I did. To get a Birdseye view of the sky is awesome. I loved your poem Andrea. Blessings xxoo

Sanjay Karmakar

Date: 11/6/2021 12:34:00 AM

Nice expression and representation. Enjoyed it. Regards, sk.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/5/2021 8:18:00 PM

Hello Andrea ... the song of a skylark up high is as good as anything you would like to hear. It's a great reflection of spring - thank you Andrea - Lindsay