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Silence of the Butterflies

As sunrise silently marinaded morningtide meadows, our lips flowed like two streams, merging within an exclusive estuary so we set home upon the river bed. At first we floated like butterflies in Babylon, deaf to the squawks of mercenary crows, blind to the creeping weeds, which wandered amongst delicate petals nor did I notice our submerging embankment. As our estuary began to evaporate, you left me stranded in the silt and mud. My heart, once a blossoming garden, evolved into a wasteland of sedges and sludge. Still I wait for soothing streams to return, but all I am left with is marshland of regret and the silence of the butterflies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Farookh Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 3:46 AM
Congratulations, SO, for your win. Your poem is just as sweet as the butterflies in Babylon. God bless!
Ligon Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Powerful write!
Johnston Avatar
March 31, 2019 at 7:11 PM
I offer the sound of one hand clapping! Write in peace my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 6:28 PM
good thing not silence of the lambs!
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 6:27 PM
this has some really pretty imagery and the emotion is sad and melancholic.Love that!
Callus Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 12:48 PM
Beautiful! It definitely goes hand in hand with the accompanying music, and I like the alliteration which is not overdone. Regards // paul
Krutsinger Avatar
March 24, 2019 at 10:00 AM
The silence of the butterflies intrigues me, and sets me free in a variety of ways. It sounds like a betrayal to me, however, there is hope and optimism shining through, which makes betrayal so much easier.
La France Avatar
March 23, 2019 at 8:09 AM
Silent, simply beautiful, your words are divine and sublime, I love the music and the image, well done ~
Thayer Avatar
March 20, 2019 at 7:20 AM
Love the line...at first we floated like butterflies in babylon. Vickie Thayer
Hagy Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:36 PM
Poetic mastery as always Silent...nothing new for me yet...been so busy in real time!...glad I had a minute today though, this is lovely :) Have a great day
Williams Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 6:41 AM
I love this poem Si, its a classic. Another one to add to my Fave List....Maria Hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:45 AM
Beautifully expressive with imagery to match Silent! ; )
Daniel Avatar
March 12, 2019 at 3:30 AM
Wow! Deep and touching, SO:)
Horsman Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 4:59 PM
A Shelly moment whilst reading this poetic gem.
Roper Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 1:36 PM
Well done, my friend. Hugs Eve ~`*
Proxenos Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 11:10 AM
A fantastic poem SO - the last three lines tell all! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 8:45 AM
- A wonderful poem, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 7:38 AM
you never cease to amaze me sweet Silent One. I remember the first poem I read of yours in 2015, my how long ago, huh? You are beautiful and so are your words....thanks for all you share on this site. :)-luloo
Castellenas Avatar
March 11, 2019 at 2:30 AM
Great song and the words. Wonderful and perfect.
Mcferran Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 11:52 PM
Such an evocative piece... amazing work! ;)
Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 11:48 PM
What awesome metaphor and I like using the word estuary for poems. This is said in marvellous poetic lovesick silence and longing it is charming n so appealing. Kudos for such great poetry!!! Best wishes,
Nicole Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 8:27 PM
Silence holds many moments indeed. Strange isn't, how that can be. This is beautiful and tender. ~ Brandy
S     Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 5:13 PM
I am completely blown away by this captivating masterpiece!! As always ... a bow to you brilliant poet :)
One Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 6:57 PM
Thank you Judy..
Leiser Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Such a perfect marriage of metaphors for another outstanding poem, Silent! So creatively written! :)
One Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 6:58 PM
Thank you Laura..
Wanter Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 3:58 PM
This is perfectly gorgeous, Silent One, without the music, standing alone. But I like the music you chose, also, and the pictures.
One Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 7:00 PM
Thank you... I like to add music to my poems..
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