Silence

The silence has been audible
I  hear it all around.
I truly haven’t known before
That silence has a sound.

We all sit without conversing.
There's nothing left to say.
If our loved one survives the night.
He may not survive the day.

We’ve unplugged all the noisy clocks
That would disturb his rest.
When everything is quieted,
One hears the silence best.

All of time has been suspended
As has each throbbing word.
A life of merit is ending
And now the void is heard.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/13/2011 4:15:00 AM
Superb, no wonder it came in first. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 1/6/2011 10:32:00 AM
Many congratulations Joyce on your fine win in Paula's contest, I love the cleverness in your poem....:)
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Date: 1/5/2011 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/3/2011 1:11:00 PM
That is a sound of silence for sure..Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/3/2011 12:20:00 PM
No wonder this was chosen number one in the contest. I have just read one of the best poems I have ever encountered on any poetry website.
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Date: 1/3/2011 4:00:00 AM
Joyce, This is a beautiful poem, well done!!
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Date: 1/2/2011 9:23:00 PM
Joyce, Congrats on your well deserved win it the contest. Thanks so much for your kind comments on mt stuff. Love, Will
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:03:00 PM
An amazing write dear Joyce. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/2/2011 6:20:00 PM
Truly a wonderful number one winner here, awesome. congrats, Harry
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Date: 1/2/2011 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome poem, Joyce! So well-deserved. I especially love the last line of the first stanza "...That silence has a sound"! Well done! Love, Audrey
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:36:00 AM
it is so true.....the void in such a silence can be so loud and heartbreaking. A thoughtful and well deserved win, Joyce.
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your well deserved big win!
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:03:00 AM
Hey Joyce, congrats on your well deserved win! Lay
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Date: 1/2/2011 2:26:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved first place win in the contest of Paula, Joyce
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:39:00 PM
congradulations this is clearly a number one choice. John Henry Loving III
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:37:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on first place in the contest with this wonderful poem ~~
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:23:00 PM
Truly the best of the best, Joyce. So happy for your first-place win. Congratulations! Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:18:00 PM
Fantastic write Joyce, congratulations on your great win, love Wilma
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:17:00 PM
Wow, Joyce you are on a roll. Congrats. BG
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:07:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win in the Silence contest with this incredible entry my friend.. enjoy with luv on this first day of 2011...
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Date: 12/30/2010 10:12:00 AM
Silence can be deafening, Joyce. I'm sure many people will identify with your message. Thanks for your comments. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:39:00 AM
Reminds me of when my grandmother was dying.. Thankyou for this well written and touching read...
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:27:00 AM
YES! Silence IS a sound. And in this case it is a sound that accompanies the angst of waiting for one to die. I heard this sound for days as my father lingered in a coma. It is the worst "sound" I ever heard. Brilliant poem, dear friend. Definitely a favorite for me. Forgive me for not reading more; I've got the flu and it's been keeping me in bed. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/30/2010 9:15:00 AM
true and silence is always meaningful, enjoyed your write Joyce,..p.d.
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Date: 12/30/2010 8:11:00 AM
An awesome write, I really enjoyed this read, so tranquil, beautiful. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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