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Shambles

The old homestead is a shambles, nearly hidden in wild brambles. My mind reveals a happy place that had once held your funny face. The tree swing we once swung upon is fallen rotted and now gone. How many the years, or the miles, have stolen those days of our smiles? I survey the giant oak trees we would climb for a cooling breeze. Now covered in wild woody vines that hold our secrets in confines. All in shambles and forsaken, my early memories shaken. Has life, like home, come to descend from vibrant life to final end?

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Date: 4/13/2023 8:12:00 PM
Linda, though the old home may be in shambles your fond memories bespangle. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/14/2023 6:38:00 AM
Hi Belle. Thank you for your visit and kind comments. I took this idea from my father's old home where he grew up and where I vaguely remember spending some time as a very young toddler. Visiting after so long, barely anything remained except for the old root cellar.
Date: 4/13/2023 3:50:00 PM
Powerful poem of reflection, Linda. Something to think about. Good luck in the contest! Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/13/2023 5:01:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your visits and comments. :)
Date: 4/13/2023 8:26:00 AM
The home that held so many lovely memories, Very nicely penned Linda, Congrats on your win
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/13/2023 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 4/13/2023 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Linda. Beautiful rhyme
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/13/2023 7:38:00 AM
Thank you my friend! :)
Date: 4/12/2023 9:22:00 PM
These are the thoughts that come to my mind on seeing my ancestral home that once towered as a strong edifice of love and prosperity, now in shambles. Very nostalgic. A beautiful poem, a bit sad too. Congratulations on your great win dear Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/13/2023 7:37:00 AM
Many thanks dear Valsa. I am glad to see you here and doubly glad to hear your sweet comments. :)
Date: 4/12/2023 8:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem, Linda. Blessings
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/13/2023 7:37:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind visit and congrats Lasaad. :)
Date: 4/12/2023 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Shambles" is a wonderful write/story. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/12/2023 5:45:00 PM
Thank you for kind words Paula, and for your congrats! hugs :)
Date: 4/12/2023 10:22:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/12/2023 5:44:00 PM
Thank you Constance. I always enjoy your contests. I appreciate the placement. :)
Date: 4/12/2023 10:16:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Linda :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/12/2023 5:44:00 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise! hugs :)
Date: 4/10/2023 8:01:00 PM
Great, albeit sad, interpretation of what you encountered, Linda!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/11/2023 8:50:00 AM
Thank you gw. It started out differently, but the more I wrote, it turned in my mind. LOL I never know! :) laf
Date: 4/10/2023 5:01:00 AM
You have excelled in your description, Linda, I could picture this and the final question is the climax!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/10/2023 6:20:00 AM
Thank you for your positive and supportive words Jo! :)
Date: 4/9/2023 8:10:00 PM
Your description is mind boggling Linda. I can actually see the old homestead in my mind. Brilliantly depicted. This is a lovely heartfelt poem for what was a loved home. Well done. Best wishes
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/10/2023 6:19:00 AM
Many thanks my friend. I always appreciate your comments Wen! :)
Date: 4/9/2023 4:48:00 PM
Love the sentiment you've captured here, Linda, and how you've captured it. Added this to my faves, for nostalgia's sake ;) Peace - john
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/9/2023 5:07:00 PM
Nice to see you here John. Thank you for your kind comments and for your fav! :) peace, Linda
Date: 4/9/2023 4:45:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Linda. Nostalgic, and then ends dramatically. Best of luck on the contest!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/9/2023 5:04:00 PM
Many thanks for your visit Ryan. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and wishes, :)

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