Shambles

The old homestead is a shambles,
nearly hidden in wild brambles.
My mind reveals a happy place
that had once held your funny face.

The tree swing we once swung upon
is fallen rotted and now gone.
How many the years, or the miles,
have stolen those days of our smiles?

I survey the giant oak trees
we would climb for a cooling breeze.
Now covered in wild woody vines
that hold our secrets in confines.

All in shambles and forsaken,
my early memories shaken.
Has life, like home, come to descend
from vibrant life to final end?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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April 13, 2023 at 8:12 PM
Linda, though the old home may be in shambles your fond memories bespangle. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Fowler Avatar
April 14, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Hi Belle. Thank you for your visit and kind comments. I took this idea from my father's old home where he grew up and where I vaguely remember spending some time as a very young toddler. Visiting after so long, barely anything remained except for the old root cellar.
Baker Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Powerful poem of reflection, Linda. Something to think about. Good luck in the contest! Bill
Fowler Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your visits and comments. :)
May Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 8:26 AM
The home that held so many lovely memories, Very nicely penned Linda, Congrats on your win
Fowler Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 8:27 AM
Thank you Joseph!
Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Linda. Beautiful rhyme
Fowler Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 7:38 AM
Thank you my friend! :)
George Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 9:22 PM
These are the thoughts that come to my mind on seeing my ancestral home that once towered as a strong edifice of love and prosperity, now in shambles. Very nostalgic. A beautiful poem, a bit sad too. Congratulations on your great win dear Linda.
Fowler Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 7:37 AM
Many thanks dear Valsa. I am glad to see you here and doubly glad to hear your sweet comments. :)
Poet Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 8:22 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem, Linda. Blessings
Fowler Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 7:37 AM
Many thanks for your kind visit and congrats Lasaad. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Shambles" is a wonderful write/story. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Fowler Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 5:45 PM
Thank you for kind words Paula, and for your congrats! hugs :)
La France Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Linda, thank you so much for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Fowler Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Thank you Constance. I always enjoy your contests. I appreciate the placement. :)
Andresen Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 10:16 AM
- A beautiful poem, Linda :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Many thanks Anne-Lise! hugs :)
Wolf Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 8:01 PM
Great, albeit sad, interpretation of what you encountered, Linda!
Fowler Avatar
April 11, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Thank you gw. It started out differently, but the more I wrote, it turned in my mind. LOL I never know! :) laf
Daniel Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 5:01 AM
You have excelled in your description, Linda, I could picture this and the final question is the climax!
Fowler Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 6:20 AM
Thank you for your positive and supportive words Jo! :)
Volumes Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 8:10 PM
Your description is mind boggling Linda. I can actually see the old homestead in my mind. Brilliantly depicted. This is a lovely heartfelt poem for what was a loved home. Well done. Best wishes
Fowler Avatar
April 10, 2023 at 6:19 AM
Many thanks my friend. I always appreciate your comments Wen! :)
Oldham Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 4:48 PM
Love the sentiment you've captured here, Linda, and how you've captured it. Added this to my faves, for nostalgia's sake ;) Peace - john
Fowler Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 5:07 PM
Nice to see you here John. Thank you for your kind comments and for your fav! :) peace, Linda
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April 9, 2023 at 4:45 PM
Beautiful piece, Linda. Nostalgic, and then ends dramatically. Best of luck on the contest!
Fowler Avatar
April 9, 2023 at 5:04 PM
Many thanks for your visit Ryan. I appreciate your thoughtful comments and wishes, :)
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