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From mid-September through mid-October, hot air ballons

frequent the morning skies here in North Texas.  They're a 

stunning sight to see drifting along the cloudless, azure skies.

The sultry summer past, September comes. The warm sun illuminates the world and all its creatures. The clouds above are high and wispy. Softly the breeze blows, gently caressing my face and fondly lingering there. The first hot air balloon of the season drifts by, as quiet as a mouse. Every so often, its burners roar, sending it higher into the sky. From down below, I wave ‘hello’ to the man in the basket. The air around me is alive with hushed confusion, whispering of the change of season. The scent of harvested grain fields wafts through the air. The roadsides are lined with a radiant glow. The trees glitter with tumbling leaves. Summer’s locusts are still rasping, though, shrill and bold. In the evening, cool shadows fall. Along the eastern sky, the harvest moon appears. It takes off and sinks upward, rising above the horizon. It is redly burning, symbolizing the winter ahead. Yes, September days are here, With summer’s best of weather and autumn’s best of cheer.

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Date: 9/15/2023 11:27:00 PM
Loved this especially the last 2 lines, the Fall is my favorite season!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/16/2023 4:00:00 AM
thank you, Arthur, for stopping by and enjoying fall with me. Tis beautiful right now...so peaceful. Have a peaceful day, Sara
Date: 9/15/2023 5:33:00 PM
It is inspiring to see the balloons flying through the sky. Thanks for sharing your thoughts of them with us through your creative poetry, Sara. A poet friend, right down the hallway, Bill
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Date: 9/15/2023 2:17:00 PM
Beautiful scenery. I love this. Very nice :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/15/2023 2:32:00 PM
thank you for stopping by. Hope you have a wonderful September day, Sara
Date: 9/15/2023 11:58:00 AM
I can see your appreciation for all that around in this beautiful poem you’ve crafted with such soul warming imagery. I find it beautiful to see those hot air balloons, etc, although i would dare not get on one. We dont have them here but we do have parasailing and iv been on that which was scary for me. I love the way you paint art through words, you truly are a gifted poetess that makes me dream away everytime i read your poem. Septembers never sounded so beautiful, before. Hope u are well
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/16/2023 10:45:00 AM
Ah sara same here i am scared of heights, and i hate flying too , but i face my fears many times, and i did parasailing for my sons sake, he was proud of me, haha somethings we do to make our children smile: thank you and you too stay blessed always
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/15/2023 12:20:00 PM
thank you, "Ink," for you joining me on September days. I'm grateful you found my imagery soul-warming. I, too, would never get on a hot air balloon or parasail...I'm a bit afraid of heights. You were brave in trying parasailing. I'm impressed. I appreciate your kind words and compliments about my writing. You make my day. Enjoy your September day! hugs, Sara
Date: 9/15/2023 8:12:00 AM
You've described September's beauty as if I were there, I watch for the colorful gigantic balloons in the azure sky, scents of harvest. I love this, Sara, and the cooling down of September. Have a good day! Xhug
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 9/15/2023 12:18:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by and joining me on my journey into the September sky. I appreciate you! Here's to September's cooler days. Enjoy yours hugs, Sara
Date: 9/15/2023 7:39:00 AM
Hi Tom--thanks for stopping by and reading my free-verse. Yes, Bill & I live in Texas...north of Dallas. This summer (like last summer) was truly beastly hot--drought conditions. After college, I moved to Indiana and remember how beautiful Indiana and Ohio were in September--a true fall season. The leaves die off the trees here in August so we don't get much of the beautiful leaf colors. No, never been in a hot air balloon. They look so magical in the sky though. Enjoy your day, kind sir.
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Date: 9/15/2023 6:04:00 AM
September is an awesome month here in Ne Ohio. I guess you're in Texas? Whew! Been a scorcher so I'm sure all Texans are looking for an autumn reprieve. Never been in a hot air balloon. You?
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Bill Baker
Date: 9/15/2023 5:36:00 PM
Hi Tom--thanks for stopping by and reading my free-verse. Yes, Bill & I live in Texas...north of Dallas. This summer (like last summer) was truly beastly hot--drought conditions. After college, I moved to Indiana and remember how beautiful Indiana and Ohio were in September--a true fall season. The leaves die off the trees here in August so we don't get much of the beautiful leaf colors. No, never been in a hot air balloon. They look so magical in the sky though. Enjoy your day, kind sir.

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