Senryu For Chris

smooth tongue flatterer --offers great deal-- -steals investments- For Chris's contest

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/19/2010 11:04:00 AM

nice one, Joyce-- deception indeed-- wish you the best Chris' contest :)-- nikko ;)

James Fraser

Date: 9/18/2010 5:40:00 PM

You sure captured those guys with this shortie Joyce. Good luck in Chris's contest >> James :)

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/17/2010 9:37:00 AM

You tell it like it is, Joyce. Great entry for Chris's contest! Have a nice weekend, Diane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 2:25:00 PM

Soup mail returned, Joyce. Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2010 11:34:00 PM

GOOD one, Joyce. Gosh, are we supposed to put senryu for Chris on the heading?? Geez,I better check that out?? Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/15/2010 1:42:00 PM

Very true Joyce.. great entry for the contest ...good luck my friend.. glad babies are home and well now... now u can really play Grandma so wonderful to them...

Constance La France

Date: 9/15/2010 7:04:00 AM

Thanks for commenting on my poetry, Joyce. Yes, indeed there are some smooth talkers in this world, we must be aware, best of luck in the contest~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2010 10:10:00 PM

Another good poem from you Joyce!! LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/14/2010 7:06:00 PM

a good entry for the contest, good luck..P.D.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/14/2010 6:45:00 PM

There are a lot of examples of this type of behavior in our world today, Joyce. Powerful poem! Best wishes in Chris's contest. Love, Carolyn