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Secret Rendezvous

I was happily married, but there was something I adored. I couldn't resist the temptation, of needing something more. So good to feel on my warm lips, I couldn't wait. In the middle of the night, I didn't feel guilty, or hesitate. I snuck out of the bedroom, not wanting to wake my wife. My conscience didn't bother me, as I dreamed of this, all night. Quietly I went downstairs, for my secret rendezvous. Open the refrigerator door, and had three scoops. Michael Tor

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Date: 10/8/2022 5:37:00 PM
Grand! There's nothing quite like a savory ice cream to spike the sugar rush in so many of us. Your ending is a clever twist on a bedroom escape to a sweet indulgence. Cheers Brian
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Date: 10/19/2022 3:18:00 AM
Thank you Brian sorry for late response. Just noticed should have checked comments. I appreciate your thoughtful comment...
Date: 10/7/2022 3:15:00 AM
Good Morning michael. Your ending is priceless and leaves us all on a good feeling note. And yes, your execution is very smooth with flow. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 10/3/2022 1:31:00 PM
Well, Michaell, I imagine every marriage needs a little tweaking now and then. I'm glad your indiscretion was/is only caloric.
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Date: 10/6/2022 7:56:00 PM
Lol thank you Jim your comment had me laughing. Thanks for the comment it was worth writing. Me too. lol...
Date: 10/3/2022 11:00:00 AM
I just knew it was food. Good one. I guess you have sweet tooth. I'm going for the chips
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Date: 10/3/2022 12:02:00 PM
Ha ha enjoy the chips Dear Andrea. I still can't get over Connie not being here so sad...
Date: 10/1/2022 11:16:00 AM
You had me going there for a while, Michael. A smooth, sweet, and flowing verse, love the twist ending. 2-scoops of mint for moi! Bon appetit! Lol~Anaya
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Date: 10/3/2022 12:01:00 PM
Lol your so funny. Enjoy Dear Anaya your mint any chocalote chips in there? Either way it taste great. Thanks for your sweet comment...
Date: 9/25/2022 10:15:00 AM
Michael. Michael.! This is so wonderfully composed, I really loved it. Phenomenal close! Thank you. Hugs, Pangie xx
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Date: 9/25/2022 5:06:00 PM
Glad you like it Pangie, blessings your way...
Date: 9/24/2022 6:15:00 AM
Sweet secrets Michael. giggles :)) Linda
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Date: 9/24/2022 4:41:00 PM
Hope you enjoyed Linda picking up firty quarts for my wife before parlor shuts down for winter best vanilla in the world. Be blessed my Dear...
Date: 9/24/2022 2:04:00 AM
Oh, three entire scoops, Michael! Nice read. Thanks.
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Date: 9/24/2022 4:40:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed John...
Date: 9/23/2022 9:56:00 PM
I love the build up to an explosive (in laughter) ending. This gem is in my faves. Best of wishes. :D
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Date: 9/24/2022 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn glad you enjoyed Dear and thank you so much for the favorite...God bless you...
Date: 9/20/2022 7:50:00 AM
Michael, Love this ! So clever..and secretive . I adore the ending . Silent sweetness enveloping you ! Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 9/20/2022 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Susan, for your sweet comment. I appreciate your kind comment Hugs back and God bless you...
Date: 9/19/2022 8:23:00 PM
I never expected this sort of a turn of events, Michael ! I guess it must have been a hot day. You have made me wish for such an adventure in the night.....!Much enjoyed your naughty escapade.
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Date: 9/20/2022 4:18:00 AM
Thank you Valsa. I wanted to lead the reader in the wrong direction, lol. My wife when I showed her this poem told me to get her some vanilla ice dream lol. It reminded her of when she sometimes has an urge to indulge in ice cream and the fridge is empty. So she made me run up to the Ice cream parlor to get some lol. She smiled after reading the poem and said from now on I am walking down in the middle of the night to make sure you are just getting ice cream. Lol. My response was , you know me better than that. Thank you for stopping by Valsa. Blessings to you...
Date: 9/19/2022 7:34:00 PM
CUTE! You naughty guy, you. ~ Scoopy-Do
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Date: 9/20/2022 4:12:00 AM
Lol. Gershon what were you thinking? A simple trip downstairs to get ice cream, thats all. What were you thinking? lol.
Date: 9/19/2022 5:14:00 PM
Exceptional, Michael. Your wife is so lovely that she won't even notice the three scoops that are missing. I enjoyed the escalation of the suspense and the unexpected resolution as well as the humor. I hope all is well with you. Greetings, dearest friend Michael.
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Date: 9/20/2022 4:14:00 AM
Thank you my friend. I am glad you enjoyed the humor. Hope your doing well and I will stop by and see your latest Poetry...
Date: 9/19/2022 12:26:00 PM
MMMMmmm!! Good. Ice cream is awesome. Thanks for sharing and dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/19/2022 4:37:00 PM
Your welcome Sara thank you.
Date: 9/19/2022 11:21:00 AM
Love it! Three scoops and one more. But why the spoon was out for you already? Wives know all. Blessings my friend! You get a Fav.!
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Date: 9/19/2022 12:11:00 PM
Thank you Joe for your lovely comment. Yes wives know all my friend. Thanks for stopping by...
Date: 9/19/2022 8:51:00 AM
Totally charming ~ your wife will never notice those three missing scoops... you hope.
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Date: 9/19/2022 10:44:00 AM
I hope, but usually If she gets to the fridge before I do and if it is vanilla flavor, I know I am off to the store, to buy more lol. She loves vanilla Line and I should just buy an ice cream machine, to make it for her to save on the many trips I have made in the middle of the night when she realizes that I had the last three scoops lol...
Date: 9/19/2022 1:10:00 AM
What's your flavor, Michael? Liked your sense of humor in this one.
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Date: 9/19/2022 10:39:00 AM
Jenna I love all the flavors it is really hard to pick one. My wife loves vanilla, I do to, but chocolate is great also, and strawberry. I can't make up my mind Jenna lol. You got me thinking, how about a banana split they have all three. lol. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 9/18/2022 10:21:00 PM
Loved the buildup of tension and the ending. Leave some scoops for me please.
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Date: 9/19/2022 10:37:00 AM
I will Victor hope you enjoyed my friend...
Date: 9/18/2022 9:28:00 PM
Reads like ‘escape from Alcatraz’ :)
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Date: 9/19/2022 10:36:00 AM
Ha ha U Seeker had me smiling with your comment my friend thanks for the visit...
Date: 9/18/2022 1:17:00 PM
Must be a shock to the one you marry She can’t hold a spoon to Ben and Jerry! Just kidding, enjoyed, Michael
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Date: 9/18/2022 1:20:00 PM
Ha ha ha Jeff I have to show her your comment. Love it. Thanks for stopping by my friend...
Date: 9/18/2022 1:02:00 PM
Lol wasn't expecting that ending Michael, love the humour, Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Date: 9/19/2022 12:25:00 AM
Lake Garda, Verona and Venice.
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Date: 9/18/2022 6:07:00 PM
Tom make sure you have some of the great pizza there in Naples. Are you headed there or another part of Italy? Tuscany is beautiful. Enjoy yourself my friend when they ask you what you do for a living you make sure you tell them you are the Mayor of Soup Creek, lol. They will cater to you a little more.
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Date: 9/18/2022 1:26:00 PM
In the UK at the moment for now but heading off to Italy soon.
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Date: 9/18/2022 1:19:00 PM
Thanks Tom where was your mind my friend? lol. I hope your enjoying your weekend Tom. I hate to guess what country you're in. I am going to assume and say your own but that could change from week to week. I know you have to come home soon to join us at Soup Creek.Thanks for stopping by and enjoy yourself and making some memories my friend. God bless you and all you love nice to see you...