Sea Legs

Off the ladder without a life jacket.
            “Her ascent, was imminent,” said the sea,
“I wasn’t up for all that drowning racket.”
Dives in with her orange vest - carefree,
                        holding handles, she’s propelled through the deep,
where many ghosts do not talk in their sleep,
and tears of loved ones join many who weep.
      The mermaid with a lucid tail; loose lips,
            her hourglass figure and tongue making flips;
                        she’s flippant about the she-human hips.
“What no swishy-tail?! Look at that jacket…”
            “She’s not a talent, like you…let her be…
      Look at those two legs…think of the upkeep.”
            In due time, she-human ascends, then slips.

2/14/2023
Fragmented Rhyme
Sponsor: Emile Pinet
Used Howmanysyllables & Rhymezone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
March 2, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Dear Kim, such a unique and fantastic poetic creation. Enthralling imagery! Congratulations for your excellent win in Emile's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 1:22 PM
She-human is no match in the water for the shapely and she-angel mermaid. Congratulations on your win Kim! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Truly…lol! The klutz with legs and the graceful mermaid :)
Pinet Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations Kim! Your fun poem "SEA LEGS", earned you a distinguished place in my contest. You should be proud, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem rose above them all to a podium position, well done my friend, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:53 PM
I truly appreciate that, Emile! I know you have high standards not unlike our departed friend, Milton.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 17, 2023 at 10:51 AM
I enjoyed your creative write. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:52 PM
I appreciate you, Paula! Blessings!
Baker Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 4:31 PM
Fun and entertaining read, Kim. Lots of truth in there too. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Daniel Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 9:57 PM
Great use of metaphors in your sea tale, Kim:)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Thank you, Jo!
Buehler Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Kim, I was captivated by your fascinating, beautiful tale! Good luck in the contest. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Thank you, Evelyn!
DiMino Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 8:48 PM
Delightful Kim; never boring, and always entertaining...and frankly, quite brilliant! Love it.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Thank you kindly, Joe!
Faulkner Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Clever ending, love the title too!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 2:50 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Chuuk Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Oh yeah, I too enjoyed this beauty. All the best in the contest, Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 3:31 PM
Thank you, Fin!
Elless Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 9:00 AM
Kim, that is sweet and beautiful. Flowing and makes Sense. I like it. Have A Great Day.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Thank you :)
Poet Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Kim, this is just fantastic work that is a delight to read and take pleasure in. Your work is made even more beautiful by the wondrous diction and metaphors you employ. Win big
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Thank you, my friend!
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