Runaways

RUNAWAYS

My two darlings once pretended  to run away.
It seemed a good game for the day;
But they started to hide in a different way,
And ended up lost in a field  full of  hay.

Running away, they found they soon got tired,
Then the raccoon was suddenly inspired:
A taxi quick and cheap was hired  -
But little they knew the driver was wired.

Police then tracked my runaway pair   -
Descriptions were broadcast over the air,
“Black furry mask, tawny hair:
When approaching these culprits you must take care”

The exhausted pair were late home tired flat.
Raccoon had had to carry the cat.
She was always unfit and far too fat.
So all day  he’d walked , and only rarely sat.

He hadn’t stopped in the sun to bask  -
I just knew, I didn’t have to ask.
Despite his criminal-looking mask
He had honestly given his all  to the task.

“That mask on your eyes
Ain’t gonna help, nor your sighs,
Not even your cute petite size -
When  your punishment I  devise”

Oh well, that’s what was said;
But my darlings were fed, then put straight into bed.
It’s one thing to have a mask on your head;
But another to carry a pal  who’s half-dead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 5:16 AM
Great story, Sydney. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Freeman Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 7:18 PM
Yep, Great job Sydney. Tell me about it! Great to see your success in Francine's cute contest. Nice take on the picture. Congratulations on your worthy Hm place. Lol, Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 2:08 PM
Congrats Syd on your HM in Francine's contest with this awesome creation luv.. enjoy a very special honor all your own for excellence .. a great honor luv..
Onclaud Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 1:26 PM
you funny boy, syd! cheers for the high, high win.. a winner for top 5 for me! :) hugggs
Johnson Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Really cute and funny. Copngratulations. Love, joyce
Brown Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on your win Sydney in Francine Roberts contest "Tell me about it. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Aw, this is such a cute story told in verse, Syd. Congratulations on your success in the contest. There are some amazing entries for this one. Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:18 AM
another interesting story, you and Constance should turn these into childrens books, wonderful entry, congrats on your HM in the contest
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March 26, 2011 at 3:35 AM
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