Roar

Always young at heart and old in soul
never at ease in the linked up, stuck-up clichés
of childhood or the bizarre unfriendly world of adulthood,
I always roared…at five my boyfriend Dave was four.
He was a good kisser too.
Just about the only kisses I got [except from mom] till I was sixteen,
at which point a charming fifteen year old
and Irishman [black Irish rosy red cheeked
dancing black eyes and a curl which feel into them]
became my beau and to my junior prom as a sophomore
he went, returned the favor, he did, the next year.
I went as a senior to his Junior prom,
hair all done up like Olive Oil. “God it looked awful!”
My Senior prom, he was my Napoleon,
again and I in empire white his Josephine 
[no we weren’t crowned King and Queen].
College saw me behind the eight ball again
With all my lovely new friends “hookers?”
[‘Well, Ma said!!! If you did that you were…]
Since I wouldn’t I had a slew of BOY friends
[Sometimes three would drop in on the same night
ahhhhhh the power of abstinence!]
Sophmore year I found true love, it almost killed me.
And yes Adonis was a freshman, an Italian dream
with a wrestlers Greco-roman body…lasted three years.
And, in walked the next Italian lovers [three years younger]
A few years latter we were married. Thirty years passed
Closeted cloistered years, over protected, smothered years
and with freedom came new loves, all younger than me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
July 5, 2011 at 4:21 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Debbie in the contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 11:41 AM
I am woman and see you roar!! Good win, Debs. I too dated lots of guys younger. I enjoyed this walk down your memory lane.
Horne Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 12:45 PM
I can't believe how many contest results I've missed - many congrats on all your recent wins, Debs : )
George   Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 4:04 AM
Way to go girl!for the FIRST PLACE WIN and for every other way. Lainie
Villanueva Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 10:38 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your great big deserving win on the contest! ^_^ jun-jun
Mohammed Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 10:08 PM
Dear Debie.. Congrats for winning the contest, lovely, imaginative and very touching poem.. 'close to my heart, yet a distant dream..' have a wonderful time keep writing, keep smiling musafirs
Sweetheart Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 6:13 PM
congrats Debbie as u roared your way to first place in the contest luv.. happy 4th..we are watching fireworks soon at seashore..oh..wow..
Johnson Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 5:45 PM
Congratulations on your great confessional poem. and no. 1 win. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 4:35 PM
I have read this type of poem after long time and I am so happy to place you in the first place, Debbie. My congratumations
Devonshire Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Dear Deb, I love this poem and am delighted to see it taking first place. Well-deserved win at the very top of the list! Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Congratulations on your win in Ram's contest, with this wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it very much~~
Phookan Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 2:15 AM
Oh to be loved...those wonderful years gone by!! Beautiful men you described here, Italian men and that Irish boy rosy cheeked..Iloved the last line,me think it means the babies..if for contest ,good luck..if not why not enter for cougar,,I find it excellent debbie..huggs
Devonshire Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Sad in a way but also witty, Deb. One boy from another school told me he was a senior, but I later learned he was a sophomore and wouldn't have anything more to do with him. Now I don't care about age at all. If a match is good, that's all that counts. It's sad to hear you felt smothered in your 33-year marriage, Deb. Somehow I thought you were too young to have been married that long. Your photo is so youthful! Wishing you success with this great poem. Love, Carolyn
Rhinem Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 10:20 AM
Smile ~ What a dish, my dear Debster ~ “MmM” ~ Love, Juan!:) ~
Mehta Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 8:17 AM
Thanks for the entry, Deb
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 6:49 PM
Nowadays your muse seems to be on the seventh floor, enjoying your poems one after the other, Debbie
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