Requiem for a Motherless Child

I was buried in a tomb for unknown persons.
When I was alive I knew nothing of this life.
Now that I'm dead I seem to have acquired it all.
My heartless mother abandoned me, unwanted,
Left me on the cold stairs of the door of Poor Claire's.
The rain fell incessantly and I cried hungry.

It was a time when the pandemic COVID raged.
Sister Grace was immune and she heard my poor plight.
She carried me inside, took care of me, knowing
I would not survive the night. She prayed the last rites,
She baptised me, named me Ruth. By morn I was dead.

Someone found a white box and laid me inside it.
Wearing a face mask and gloves they drove me quickly
To a small cemetery. No one wanted me.
No records were kept, just known as “Ruth Unwanted”.

Then my spirit moved out of my body and I
Was lifted high, up above the wet cypress trees,
Above the clouds, above the sun, amongst the stars.
I heard angelic symphonies in a bright place.
I saw Him smiling with love, coming towards me.
No dirge was needed now.  I knew I was wanted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Jones Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 1:45 PM
Wow so sad and the end was uplifting !
Roper Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Heartbreaking feel , good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs
Greenhough Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 2:43 PM
I'm glad this poem has a happy ending. It conveys an interesting story that tugs at my heart. Good luck with the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:19 PM
Beautiful! I wonder if all such find themselves in the arms of grace! Blessings! You have a beautiful mind, sweet friend!
Rodgers Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 4:38 AM
Hello Victor, very moving and beautifully written. "I was buried in a tomb for unknown persons" captures the essence of abandonment, loss, and ultimate redemption. The artistic works of Ruth's journey from despair to divine embrace are both heart-wrenching and uplifting. Your words create a wonderful picture of love and hope transcending earthly suffering. It's an incredibly powerful and touching piece. - Blessings, Daniel
George Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 4:33 AM
What a transformation! From an unwanted motherless child, she got raised to God's precious child. Though she had to pass through bitter ordeals soon after she was abandoned, she reached caring hands and through death reached a place where she joined the throng of angels. A heart stirring poem. All the Best dear Victor.
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:10 AM
This is soul hitting! Ruth unwanted! Sad story of a child that was abandoned so ruthlessly youve written on that so very well! You always have a way with coming up with such moving poems! And this is no exception! Brilliant storytelling throughout too! Along with such descriptive imagery! Pleasure reading this poem! Best wishes also for the contest .
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:02 AM
Realism does effect a ticker's rise to the atriculative drama's sway in its weight of words, Victor, the attributes noted in its trailing is quite admirable. Aloha my friend, William
Rolland Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 12:48 AM
"upsetting" poem, the ending bring hope and beauty, wish you the best for the contest yann
Buehler Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 7:03 PM
There's a truly sad beginning to this story, Victor. However, the ending uplifts, with the fulfilment of Jesus' promise of an everlasting home in the heart of our Maker. Lovely writing.
Poet Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 5:56 PM
An emotionally evocative piece of writing, Victor. Truly melancholic, yet an accurate reflection of reality. I appreciate the optimistic shift in the concluding stanza.
Rose  Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 12:17 PM
ah what a sad story this is Victor, so many unwanted children being born never standing a chance on this earth, this brought a tear to my eye, thanks for sharing. :)
Woods Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 10:37 AM
That was beautiful and inspiring Victor. So unafraid and honest. Xo
White Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 7:52 AM
So sad, yet a happy ending. It is important to believe in life after death, it is the better life some will ever have.
Pandit Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 6:08 AM
A touching write, Victor. So sad, yet true to life. I like the positive turn in the ending stanza.
Edmonds  Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Children of God will always be wanted, if not on an earth, then in heaven above. God never desert’s those needing His love. A sad moving poem Victor, best wishes, Beryl
Cunningham Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 5:13 AM
A sad story that you often hear about Victor, I often wonder what's going through a mother's mind to abandon their child like that. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 4:22 AM
Great one, Victor. I enjoyed reading it. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. The ones I have written so far are not for the contest. I appreciate your kind review of them though. Sara K
One Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 3:56 AM
Hey Victor this reminds me of a movie I saw recently.. Your poem offers a deeply moving narrative about a life that begins with neglect and ends with acceptance and love. The compassionate act of Sister Grace provides a glimmer of hope amidst the desolation, while the transcendence to a higher plane brings a sense of peace and belonging. This journey from abandonment to spiritual embrace is both heart-wrenching and uplifting.
Mcintosh Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 11:17 PM
YES! God wants all babies, even those aborted ones. He keeps them by His side in heaven. Lovely writing. God bless you. love, Gina
Williams Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 11:16 PM
Your poignant poem is full of emotions of a child left abandoned. We are often left pondering the plights of the unwanted. Does the hurt ever go? Well at least for this little Soul it ended well. Great entry for the contest dearest Victor. I'm sure it will place really high...Hugs
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