Remembering When-POTW

In the misty glow of my memory
    are luminous fireflies
and a sunset that turned a red thread
    on the horizon
left as a token of a moment in time
When love was you and I was a flame,
shining on the shadow of your needs

Why does the memory of you haunt me so?
Is it a desire to feel my soul float endlessly again
or relive our passion for human endeavor
    that warmed the night
When we abandoned the world
and laid upon a starry hill
    wrapped in sighs
from the tender tendrils of love
that drifted away on whispers of moonbeams
    giving form to our silhouette
merging with a glowing sky
Where a star fell, crossing the horizon
    etching a trail
burning an image into our eyes
    leaving a sense of awe and wonder
in a moment of perfection

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Date: 8/27/2025 6:52:00 AM
Remembering the passion…lovely! Congrats on POTW!
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Date: 8/25/2025 12:59:00 PM
A picture so romantic wrapped in beautiful images that set a scene on a "starry hill" beneath a "glowing sky" where love is remembered in the tenderest of words. Congratulations on another win for this lovely poem, Frederic. Blessings
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Date: 8/23/2025 10:22:00 AM
Frederic, Dear Poet, Dear Friend, your romantic pen aches with the pain of a bittersweet flame whose mere touch burns the hands of time now so far behind you yet melts a heart that still beats with heat for the memories made "upon a starry hill". A beautiful love reminisced. Dual congratulations for the honors of POTW and your success in Rob's contest. I'm honored to share the podium with you, my dear poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/28/2025 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, dear poet, dear friend, I'm always honored by the kindness of your words; they always touch my heart, and I am honored to share the podium with you, dear poet, dear friend...Frederic
Date: 8/22/2025 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic, your poem is touching! Xo
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Date: 8/22/2025 11:09:00 AM
One way or another, I miss them all. Even the ones I didn't think I would. Your poem captured that well for me, so thanks and congrats.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/22/2025 11:29:00 AM
Thank you, Rob for your kindness
Date: 8/19/2025 1:47:00 AM
A beautiful memory in poetry. Congratulations Frederick on having received the honour of poem of the week… Beryl
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:01:00 AM
Thank you, Beryl for your kindness
Date: 8/18/2025 3:12:00 PM
Wow, you'ra an "ols timer" when it comes to the poetrysoup community. Hope this isn't the first time up here. Congratulations nonetheless. I'm certainly inspired to read more of your poetry.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:02:00 AM
yes, 12 yrs, thank you for your kindness
Date: 8/18/2025 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations Frederick! :)
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, dear poet for your kindness
Date: 8/18/2025 3:15:00 AM
returning, Frederick, to congratulate you on your POTW designation. Truly a beautiful romance poem.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:03:00 AM
thank you Sara, dear poet for your kindness
Date: 8/18/2025 3:14:00 AM
Frederick, beautifully penned. Congratulations on POTW.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:05:00 AM
thank you Tania for your kindness
Date: 8/18/2025 3:03:00 AM
- What a poem... such a beautiful memory, Frederic :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.w.... enjoy the whole week :) - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:07:00 AM
I will Anne, it was a surprize, I've been on this site 12 yrs and I can't get my avatar on the home page...so this was a surprize, dear poet...Frederic
Date: 8/17/2025 4:22:00 PM
Memories are meant to linger, whether they touch our heart in a beautiful way, or in a way that leaves a sweet ache. This is filled with romance, passion and delicate moments. Congratulations Frederic, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Brandy for your kindness
Date: 8/17/2025 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW! Hello Fredrick, breath-taking line's of pure passion and romance. Thank you for this morn's excellent read. Enjoy the day__August blessings, I Am Anaya
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:09:00 AM
thank you Anaya for your kindness
Date: 8/17/2025 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Remembering When" write. Love your line, "Why does the memory of you haunt me so?" Many have asked this question. Have a blessed day with your win...........
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Paula for your kindness
Date: 8/17/2025 8:57:00 AM
Dear Frederick, Congratulations on the honor of POTW with this passionate penning. "When we abandoned the world and laid upon a starry hill, wrapped in sighs". Awesome poem!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:10:00 AM
Thank you Nancy for your kindness
Date: 8/17/2025 6:35:00 AM
It's long past time for your poetry to be recognized as exquisite. Congratulations on these passionate lines being highlighted as poem of the week. Hugs to you, Frederic.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:12:00 AM
Hugs back to you, dear poet, and I'm grateful for the kindness of your remark...Frederic
Date: 8/14/2025 5:41:00 PM
What a gentle and engaging romance poem! The imagery in the first four lines was captivating...made me want to read on. Excellent job! wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 8/14/2025 11:51:00 AM
Dreamy... how romantic. Stargazing with the one you love. Nothing can beat that feeling. My favourite line? I was the flame shining on the shadow of your need. Pure genius. Thanks for your comment on Suzanne's poem. Means a lot to me.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/20/2025 11:14:00 AM
Dreamy...Perhaps I was thinking of you, dear poet, thank you for your kind remark...Frederic
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