Raven's Love and Hope Kept Alive

Part II



“I walk a decrepit graveyard alone, in mists stirred by contrast winds
As a storm brews, I am grateful that I know in my heart he's alive 
Skies bream with promise of torrent rain and shelter must be found
It appears; I’ve lost my shawl, and feel the cold chill even as I dream
I’m convinced it’s due to the storm; not because I walk amidst the dead
Further, I see through clammy mist a mausoleum, looms in the silence 

As I near those rusty iron gates, leaves rustle loud in the silence 
And I picture armed vagrants once here, perhaps chased by the winds
Now I rest assured, I am alone as I search this place of the dead
Painful moans erupt from within; my heart leaps; could it be, he's alive?
‘Who are you?’ My hear raced fiercely, convinced, this concludes my dream 
Intermittent moonlight cast upon the floor, My Ross, at last is found!”


In a tomb her Ross laid in the silence; by love and hope kept alive
Calling upon soft summer winds; manifested in persistent dreams 
Which resounded that among the dead, her beloved would be found

~*~
By Annalise Brigham
For: A Rambling Poet’s “Among the Dead” Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 25, 2011 at 2:59 AM
You did an amazing job on your poem and I have to tell you this poem is what inspired me to write mine for the contest. Thank you so much for that. Many congrats on your Big Win luv ~Virginia
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February 24, 2011 at 11:39 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Annalise. Love, Carol
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February 19, 2011 at 7:07 AM
Many congratulations Annalise on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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February 18, 2011 at 5:50 PM
wonderful story!congrats on your big win Annalise!
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February 18, 2011 at 4:50 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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February 18, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Beautiful poem Annalise! Congrat's on your win!~Tirzah~
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February 18, 2011 at 6:00 AM
I'm so happy to see your placing high with this masterpiece, dear Annalise. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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February 18, 2011 at 5:31 AM
glory be!! HAPPY CONGRATS for this impressive work, anna.. :) huggs, nette
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February 18, 2011 at 12:13 AM
Wonderful story Annalise. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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February 17, 2011 at 8:25 PM
Beautiful Annalise, just beautiful. many congratulations.
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February 17, 2011 at 6:31 PM
Such a haunting poem this is....wow! Great job, Annalise! Congratulations on your win! you wove a great story with words!~ love, Carrie
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February 17, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Vivid writing Annalise. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. Love, Joyce
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February 17, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Beautiful Job, Annalise, congratulations on your honored third place. Agape, Moses
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February 17, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Constance, Annalise
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February 17, 2011 at 5:21 PM
An impressive writing, Annalise. Congratulations on winning with it in the contest.
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February 17, 2011 at 4:38 PM
Congrats Annalise on your wonderful winning poem in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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February 5, 2011 at 8:58 PM
That was....well I don't even have words to express it..lol..that leaves me feeling like you should have already been published long ago if not already. Great write you have no idea how much I enjoyed it, the contest be yours :)~Virginia
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February 3, 2011 at 1:01 PM
Dear Annalise, I have a P.S, Soup Mail Call
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February 3, 2011 at 12:56 PM
Dear Annalise, Congratulations on YOUR well deserved 1st place Win in "Rain, the Story" Sponsored by "Constance a Rambling POET" Thank-YOu for my walk down the path of YOUR Dream : the same Dream I myself have walked Superb Write YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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February 2, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Oh my, was he entombed while he was still alive as in Poe's "Premature Burial"? Or was she just dreaming she heard his moans? Perhaps you intended to leave us in suspense, Annalise, and you surely did. What an awesome, awesome poem!!! I'm certain this is a winner. Love you, Carolyn
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February 2, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Thank you for supporoting my contest.
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February 2, 2011 at 12:27 PM
Love these dark poems as you know PB...Very nicely done...good luck in the contest...JAM
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