Raven

Still clutching the weapon That laid him in his grave In the mist created by evil souls No longer doomed to be his slave Silky dress woven as black as his evil deeds Nobody shed a tear for him No hearts are left to bleed Rest In Peace is a motto Not apt for his tombstone After being stained by his abuse She’s finally left alone Burn in hell you bastard Is a better epitaph For the first time in her twenty years Raven let out a haughty laugh Raven – now free to fly Forget the past – she’ll have to try Upon her birth – her mother died For what he did – his soul will fry Raven – in your silk black dress A new life – you can caress You rid the monster from your nest You put your courage to the test Fly free, Raven, fly “Guilty – not”, the bailiff cried Bid your tortured soul good-bye Fly free, Raven, fly
by Joe Flach For Constance's contest, "Among the Dead"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:44 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Joe. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 7:10 AM
Many congratulations Joe on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Poet Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 6:32 PM
Great write Joe!congrats on your well deserved win!
Devonshire Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 6:15 AM
So much anger in this compelling write, Joe. I got chills when I read the "Guilty Not" verdict. Excellent story, style and form. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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February 18, 2011 at 12:20 AM
Love this story. many congrat's on your BIG WIN, Joe. Lainie
Mannan Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 8:29 PM
Your poem takes flight with Raven. Beautiful. many congratulations.
Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Well, I'm going to try this again. I attempted to place a comment here, but the site unexpectedly went down. Congratulations on winning in Constance's contest with this entry. I predicted success for you when I first read this.
Johnson Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:18 PM
great writing Joe. You have set the Raven free. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Joe, great job, and congratulations on your 5th place honored win. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:30 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Constance, Joe
Haick Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:00 PM
Congratulations on your super fine win in the "Among the Dead" Contest, Joe. Well deserving win. Always, Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:43 PM
Congrats Joe on your winning poem in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Beesley Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Another great and twisted tale
Roberts Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 4:24 PM
love it Joe, good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
Pettit Avatar
January 14, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Joe, what you have here is a true strong contender for the contest. Even though this one will compete with as many as 99 entries, this poem should appear quite resilient.
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