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Point of No Return

Don’t be fooled by the calm waters, As you gaze over the soft gentle ripples as I did, A beautiful day out on this lonely stretch of beach, Strolling along with family and friends Why wasn’t there more people here? What a happy day as we walked, Thinking the water was safe, The children splashed and played, Then the ball was kicked just a bit further out, One friend decided to swim for it, Each time reaching further, He didn’t seem that far away, Turning round to look at us, Distress and panic on his face, He tried to swim back, But the suction was pulling him down, It had gone from shallow water, Into a disguised deep drop, The point of no return, He was fighting for his life, And we couldn’t help him, We watched him getting more tired, Then just at that moment, A passing boat headed straight for him, Relief came over us as they picked him up, Without that boat, He would have surely died, They dropped him off on shore, He was very quiet and in shock, We all were, But we didn’t know, How could we! We should of read the warning signs, It was a lonely beach, 09/12/2016 (A true story at Spurn Point England)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/11/2016 7:01:00 AM
Wow! That was intense!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 12/11/2016 8:17:00 AM
Thank you mike yes true xxxx
Date: 12/11/2016 12:37:00 AM
A suspenseful story and I'm so glad it had a happy ending. Very well written Wendy I hope this does well on the contest. 7 ; )
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 12/11/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, Connie, You never know with the contests it depends on the judges, Its ok I enjoy writing x
Date: 12/9/2016 9:46:00 PM
What an intense story, Mrs Wendy. It pulled me in, no pun intended. This should do very well:)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 12/10/2016 5:31:00 AM
Thank you daniel you never know what's around the corner x
Date: 12/9/2016 5:31:00 PM
I'm glad he was OK in the end! A terrific write, Wendy, and good luck!
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White Wolf
Date: 12/9/2016 6:34:00 PM
Read! is also pronounced as RED as in past tense! You are correct!
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 12/9/2016 5:52:00 PM
Hi Rick can I ask you if the word is spelled correct Red or Read thanks
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 12/9/2016 5:46:00 PM
Thank you yes so are we it was shallow water then a deep drop x

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