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waves pulse with rushed beats as musk fragrance draws nearer groping this moist skin Cruising the bay…he pins jasmines unto my tossed hair while a quiver of his mouth foretells -- -‘ soon, one love affair.’ Hours flash between going and coming of intimacies; Manila lights reflecting a soul -mate affinity. Those fluid thrills, who could decline such ardor, a tidal intent… relishing streams of youth's wine, before moon drips ,hours well spent a sequel to next wonders, content. Written 1/07/2016 Contest of Silent One Poet's Dozen 2: First date

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Date: 1/16/2016 7:19:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your "Poet's Dozen 2: First date" WIN!!! Love ~ LINDA ~
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations Nette. This a such a wonderful write, a well deserved win.
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Date: 1/10/2016 3:13:00 AM
Another outstanding poem to add to your winning collection Nette! Congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 1/9/2016 6:25:00 PM
Sounds like a wonderful first date. Congratulations, Nette.
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Date: 1/9/2016 5:50:00 PM
A very sophisticated and well earned win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/9/2016 4:03:00 PM
Nette, congrats on your win! Well deserved lady :)*smiles*
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:37:00 PM
Sensuality, and beautiful poetry woven together as only you could do. A gorgeous combination of forms! Congrats, dear Nette. And hope you had an amazing birthday!!
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:36:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nette, love your first date imagery.
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:10:00 PM
Very nicely written, congrats on your second place win.
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Date: 1/9/2016 3:02:00 PM
Beautifully written, Nette. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/8/2016 8:23:00 AM
Very well written. Enjoyed this prelude to passion very much.
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Date: 1/6/2016 4:21:00 PM
Very beautifully painted nette always a pleasure reading your pieces sorry dear friend not on here as much these days wishing you a blessed day pal
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Date: 1/6/2016 2:27:00 PM
Excellent write, Nette! Luck in contest.
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Date: 1/6/2016 2:10:00 PM
- HAPPY BIRTHDAY, NETTE !!!!!!!!!!!!!! - (I believe it is night with you right now ....and you sleeping ... I hope it's right) - I wish you a happy and fun day 07/01/2016 !!!! - hugs & <3 //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/6/2016 2:07:00 PM
Your eloquent poem amazes, woman! There are people we meet who connect with us in one click. Off to find my soul mate; she's home!
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Date: 1/6/2016 12:47:00 PM
You write with such expressive passion Nett. I enjoyed reading this gem. Thanks for reading and commenting on my latest. Blessings Carl
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Date: 1/6/2016 12:44:00 PM
- A beautiful poem to read tonight, Nette - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/6/2016 12:13:00 PM
a pleasure to read
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